LilySoulMahon

This was simple yet quite lovely. It made me smile. However I would have liked more detail to be added in it as I felt more of a desription would ...

I liked this, I can really image it as a song. Was beautifully written and has some nice simplistic imagery. Made me smile. :) Though I did feel like it ...

I liked this. It was different and really did make me smile. The structure made me feel like I was reading a story however; though I do know its a ...

I enjoyed this piece of poetry. It was different and it worked well, though I do think more descriptions could work nicely with it as I found it slightly rushed ...

I really like this. Its dark. I also like how its set out, though the structure is not consistant and apear to have a repeat it fits nicely. I also ...

Wow, amazing. Truly amazing piece of writng. You really do have talent Charlotte :) I'm glad I have a friend like you who I can compare stories with, aha. But ...

Wow, an impressive piece. Though I don't think I get a cookie as I have no idea what its on about though the emotions and descriptions used are amazing. I ...

I liked this, it was different :) I liked the style. It showed fustration as you're trying to reboot the computer. It gave good simplistic imagery, yet with an array ...

Lmao, did this actually happen? :') It made me really giggle, but I would of really liked more detail of your emotions and more of what you were actually seeing ...

Hey, I really liked this. Though yeah, you really do need to capitalize your letters because it can distract the reader from the story itself that you are writing which ...

I liked this. It was different. I do however, believe it could be more powerful, I like the detail but I do think it was slightly lacking. I could feel ...

A beautiful piece. The imagery and structure is simplistic yet powerful aswell. It brings across an array of emotion while also bringing forward some flashes of the memories that are ...

Wow, I really like this piece of poetry. Its simple yet powerful. I do however think you could of added more verses cause, though I know its meant to be ...

Wow, I like this, you always post good work. Its emotional and quite Dark I think. Though would of really liked to have been able to of read more, like ...

I like this piece. Its calming and simple. The imagery is good, however, I would like more detail in it as I thought it was slightly lacking. Just thought the ...