LilyJamey

First off, thanks for the review! Secondly, the word 'music' in the first sentence is intended. I better mention that in my A/N. As for the price, I just felt ...

Thanks, peanut. I edited it. There's an extra paragraph and some brief mention of her trying to escape. I didn't italicise though, because I thought, since it's from his point ...

Wow, hope you'll get out of the water as soon as you can. If you're drowning, and the bank is far away, swim. Even if it's the hardest thing you ...

I agree, it's almost completely imagery. It's good in that sense. More substance would be nice, though.. More meaning and content.

Oh yea. The most unintrigueing, boring, and utterly sleep-inducing book I have ever read would probably be Moll Flanders. I thought the summary sounded interesting, and it was - way ...

I read the first book - unfortunately, I haven't had the chance to read the second or third. Its nice, but too short.