LilyJamey

This freaks me out. It's refreshingly good, though. Is there more? Kay, gonna nitpick. The artist formally known as Helen. Artist, aye? I think you mean formerly known as. I’m ...

YES!! He died! Sorry. I just have an obsession with people dying in the end nowadays. Kinda creepy. A teenage (presumably) sex addict. Kelly became a ghost of fried nerves. ...

Oh my god. Of all the stories you write (most of which I read diligently - they're fascinating), this would be my least favourite. Because it makes me feel so ...

I liked this piece, so I'm doing the only thing I can do - nitpick! Hot tears of hate and pain squeezed out of his tightly shut eye lids. I ...

Good essay! I enjoyed it a lot. It's a fortunate coincidence that I have just finished Othello, The Moor of Venice. I agree. Iago definitely had a motive. But I ...

Ook, besides the things that Suzanne mentioned, there isn't much to say. The subway station emptied in a matter of twenty minutes. Only a little old man with a harmonica ...

Very good work. From start till ending, it made me read on and on out of curiousity of what would happen next, kept me hanging on each word. I only ...

I don't mean to be cruel, but seriously, your punctuation is atrocious! Remember to read through your story for punctuation errors. The story wasn't particularly captivating either, maybe because of ...

It's really good. I think the man was being unreasonably aggresive. Must be the testosterone. But he paid the price, and now I pity him. Figures. Your italics are fine, ...

It's good for something random that pops into your mind on impulse - lots better than mine! But I gotta agree, it's too short. Make me think, though. Weird, isn't ...

I love it! It brings a nice end to the story - George finding peace after his twin dies. It makes me feel better about it, at any rate, if ...

Nice piece. Sounds like a prose poem though. :S Why do we fallow time like it's the only thing that matters? Follow. We follow it because there's nothing else to ...

Nice poem, it's really good. There are a few odd parts here and there, mostly mentioned by Galerius, though. If I die tomorrow, I hope you know just one thing: ...

It was alright, but its not sad enough for my taste. This is principally because of the grammar mistakes. The part where he talks to Lupin and Tonks sounds a ...

Nice one. I never really liked Bellatrix (of course), but she has always been a subject of interest. This is a good story, but there are a few errors, including ...