Lilicia

Hi! Ali here! This was a very interesting and well-written piece. I loved it! :D Now for the nit-picks: As she looked up to see who I meant - though ...

Hi! I really liked this - it was funny, and well-written. I loved it how you twisted the story-line completely, yet managed to keep some of the original story as ...

Hello there! Let me start off by saying that this is a truly amazing piece - it's so beautifully written, and it's very intriguing. I'm not very good at reviewing ...

I really liked this - it seemed very realistic and the emotions were portrayed just right. Just a few things: I thought, secretly she was the reason why I had ...

I agree with Hero - it's a great idea for a story, very interesting and intriguing. In some parts it's not very clear - when, where, why?... but apart from ...

This is actually really good! It's easy to read and makes me curious as to what happens next. What kind of parents would put their child up for adoption like ...

Hello there! This is very short, so I can't do a proper review - but I can point out the mistakes: At this quiet day you hardly hear anything. This ...

This is AMAZING. It's so well written and I only found one typo: Though thje Faceless followed him every step of the way, It gave me the shivers. I could ...

Hello! This is a good start but I suggest you read over it. For now, it's very hard to read - the sentences are long and missing commas. This makes ...

This is too short to be properly reviewed, but I can point out the errors. I'll put my corrections in bold and my suggestions/comments in brackets. "What do you think ...

Wow - this was interesting! Just a few things: Suddenly her party had arrived, Take out the 'had' - that makes the sentence go too far back. Also, there should ...

This was sweet :D A few nit-picks: “I just don’t want you to go yet,” I spoke walking towards him. I don't think spoke is the best word here, it ...

I like it! 20 kids? Is that possible???!!! The ending's sad - but then again it makes a storyline, so I hope you carry on writing this story! I liked ...

This was amazing! Very descriptive and well written. Just a few things: So after talking it over with his mother and my son the Tuesday following my husband’s death, I ...

This is so touching. It made me really sad, and sent shivers up my spine - it really did. It's written really nicely - it's so easy to understand yet ...