LilacSabrie

Haha, this sounds like an anthem I need for those pesky intruders in my kitchen. Something I want to ask though: what is a 'dumbs'? I'm not really sure whether ...

This story seemed so fast-paced that even I felt left behind. The dialogue was very good; you varied up the dialects and vocabulary according to a certain character, so that ...

...I won't lie, I was attracted to the poem because the title had the word 'pink' in it...I'm a pink fanatic. ^_^ The only thing I want to remark on ...

My, my...this was a very beautiful poem. The beginning almost made me blush - the speaker's words sounded so alluring and nice. And you say that this was your first ...

Hello and Happy Review Day! Hmmm...I can see the effect you were trying to achieve from this prologue, although it is a bit short. Oh well, here we go! "She ...

Hi Ranger! The title caught my eye, so here I am. ^^ First off, I want to say that your dialogue skills are excellent. You wrote it in a way ...

This was actually interesting to read. Although a bit too short for me to review, I shall do my very best! ^w^ -Your imagery was very good here. I could ...

goodness. This poem has left me speechless, but I'm sorry to say that my review is short. On the plus side, your poem held a powerful message behind it. I ...

Awwww - this was a bit heart-wrenching for me near the end. I could definitely feel the anguish that the speaker's going through. So right there, that is a thumbs-up! ...

Ooooh, a story about a Japanese mother and children? Shame about the kids though - I felt bad for them once I read what he did - shame on him! ...

Hah! I've laughed so hard at rule number 4. Now, onto my short yet 'well-thought out' review: You've clearly got the upper hand on Death's characterization. You handled it pretty ...

'The Suicidest'....strange title, never heard anything like it. I'm guessing there is a reason though. ^^ I Breathed in shallow quick breaths, eyes wide at the site of the city ...

Hello there Kafka! First, let me just say that I can definitely see that your imagery is one of your stronger points of your writing. This was really fantastic for ...

Oh wow...this is a very nice take on the Humpty Dumpty premise! Especially when it's from another person's point of view - very clever to me. However, there is one ...

I'm new here, but I'm going to try my hand at this: I felt this had some beautifully worded moments, moments where the reader can easily visualize what is happening ...