Lil_Pau

Haha, this is really cute, it made me smile :D. Children's stories rule! Anyway, keep the chapters coming! ^^

I the only one who got that this was blatant proselytizing? As a musician (thus familiar with Requiems) and a Christian (thus familiar with the Revelations) I'm incensed. This is ...

Thanks for the review Stella! :D I'll get on with the editing. There's another 3rd part to go, which will wrap up the whole thing. :)

Thanks, Evi! I've revised some parts of the story. :)

Hey guys, thanks for the reviews! I've edited the story. :) Looks like I'll have to write that 2nd part...oh well...:P

Thanks for the reviews everyone! (I didn't expect so many. ^^)

OK, thanks for the advice and reviews, I'll keep them in mind. ^^

Thank you so much for the review, Rosey! I really appreciate it! :D

I greatly appreciate all the reviews. Thank you to everyone who reviewed. ^^ I'll start working on the next chapter. Again, thanks for the reviews! :)

I don't really like it as well. Last year, since it was getting "all-the-rage," I bought the books and I wanted to see how was it like. And it greatly ...

Thanks for the comments; I didn't really expect to get 2nd place. ^^

Amazing work! I love the way the poem started out and ended. There was some sort of atmosphere around it that really made it a good piece. It's very serene ...

This was a very fun poem. It really brightened up my day ^^ Keep up the humour! XD

This is a very whimsical and enjoyable poem. I couldn't find any fault with it. I love the emotion that accompanies it, and the rhythm is pleasing. Very good work, ...

I enjoyed this poem. It has very beautiful imagery and emotions. Who knew that a piano could mean so much more? Good work, keep it up. :)