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Lightsong

  • Poetry » General, General Re: Our Secret Dance

    Thanks for the review! The scars part wasn't intended to be taken literally, actually, I just think it represents well the others' reaction to them being gay. :)

    Apr 12, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Other Re: These Brilliant and Beautiful Lies: Ch6

    I just want to say I like reading the story from the three PoVs. You've a knack of handling characters. Review'll come sooner or later [for effective time reducer, poke ...

    Mar 30, 2017
  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: Strabismus

    Thanks! Proud Strabisian! :D

    Mar 30, 2017
  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: Strabismus

    Accidentally that was, bruh.

    Mar 28, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Hidden Entity - 3.1 - The Crater

    In this world, deity is the general term for a superior being ruling their creations, while god/dess specifies their gender. :3

    Mar 26, 2017
  • Short Story » Culture, Humor Re: To Be The Crepe of The Girl You Pine For

    It's a compelling joke with the potential to be turned into a story. I seriously welcome any piece that makes me laugh haha. It's been a long while since I ...

    Mar 17, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Science Fiction Re: Hidden Entity - 2.1 - Red Gas

    Haha it's no big deal. ^^'

    Mar 15, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Science Fiction Re: Hidden Entity - 2.1 - Red Gas

    Thanks for the review! There's only one chapter before this, btw. ;-;

    Mar 15, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Science Fiction Re: Hidden Entity - 1.3 - Argument

    Omg thanks for the review! Keep it up, bruh.

    Mar 15, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Realistic Re: Liz + Zac (1.2)

    Yeah, I read the first part and was like, 'Malaysian? Is this baiting? :o' ;) Right, so, based on your explanation, the part about being Malaysian here only concerns on ...

    Mar 10, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Science Fiction Re: Hidden Entity - 3.2 - The Crater

    Hey, thanks for the review. :D 1) Yes, there's more about being a deity than we've been told, but in the future we'd be introduced to the hierarchy of deities, ...

    Mar 8, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Other Re: These Brilliant and Beautiful Lies: Ch1

    You're welcome, and thanks for the explanation! I have a better understanding on the chapter now. Can't wait to read the next installment. :D

    Feb 22, 2017
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Wilting Plant in a Black Glass Case

    Feel free to voice it out! I'm curious on how readers interpret this poem, and i think interpretation is the most valued component in a review. (y)

    Feb 21, 2017
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Wilting Plant in a Black Glass Case

    Thanks for the review! So, what did you get from this poem? Like, whar did you understand about it?

    Feb 21, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, General Re: Like Other Girls 1.1 (LMS)

    Ah! I completely understand. Does this mean the year continues even after you finish primary school?

    Feb 20, 2017


Don't sit down and write because you're a writer; sit down and write because you have something to say. And if the sea of ideas isn't flowing, well, just tell me about your day.
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