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Re: Ohana Means Family~ Chapter Two
This review is brought to you by Read and Review Here to review as requested. :D Specifics . It took him a long time to accept that the other guys ...
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Re: Taste of Life - Prologue
Hey, I'm here to review! :D Specifics “Are we sure we want to do this? It is an entire race…” The red button pulsed with an alien light. The voice ...
Feb 8, 2016 -
Re: Brown
Hey, niteowl, I'm here to review this wonderful piece of yours! :D She is the common mistress of the world-- used by all and loved by none. I like this ...
Feb 8, 2016 -
Re: I Won't Respond That Day
This review is brought to you by Read and Review Hey! Here I am to review as requested! :D Before I go into specifics, I'd like to point out the ...
Feb 8, 2016 -
Re: The Boy Who Broke Mirrors (Chapter Two)
Alright, here I am again writing this review. :P Nitpicks. No…” I mutter to myself. I consider ellipses a pet peeve of mine, specifically the one at the end of ...
Feb 6, 2016 -
Re: The District Sleeps Alone Tonight (Music Prompt Tournament)
Alright, let's get this piece out of the Green Room, shall we? :D There’s no going back from where I am now. Nice opening line. It's not a strong hook, ...
Feb 6, 2016 -
Re: The Boy Who Broke Mirrors (Chapter One)
This review is brought to you by Read and Review Shop Hey, so here I am to give the long-awaited review. :D Sorry. >.< Nitpicks. The sound of Aiden’s voice ...
Feb 6, 2016 -
Re: The Memory
Hey, I'm here for a quick review! :D So like this poem because of its rhythm and rhyme. Especially the rhyme, because it rolls of the tongue--just perfectly smooth. It ...
Feb 5, 2016 -
Re: Hope and Me
This review is brought to you by Read and Review Shop Here to review as requested! :D Reading your title, I can see there's a grammar mistake already. It should ...
Feb 4, 2016 -
Re: Warm Meals and Dead Bodies: Part One
I guess it's time for me to review this. :D Cook County, Illinois, 1996. The starry night sky had never looked more beautiful. Just like the rotting corpse in the ...
Feb 4, 2016 -
Re: Glass & Ashes 2/2
Hey, I'm here for a quick review! :D Since I'm on phone, I'll mention things that stood out the most. Stolen? Mason thought. I realized you didn't italicize 'Stolen?' as ...
Feb 4, 2016 -
Re: Dodge Me 1.1
Hey, I'm here to review via the phone! :D Okay, so the introduction is interesting, but doesn't really hooking me in. However, I read on because of the intrigue, and ...
Feb 2, 2016 -
Re: The Quest for Fire Book One ~ Into the Mists Chapter 10
This review is brought to you by Read and Review Shop Alright. Let's review this thing. :D Nitpicks. “Who are you,” Zoltar asked through the paw clamping him to the ...
Jan 26, 2016 -
Re: Princess
Hey, I'm here to review. :D Okay, Imma talk about your formatting first. Here, I see you put the stanzas in the middle, which confuses me for its significance. Why ...
Jan 26, 2016 -
Re: Tips for Taking Over Summer Camp Chapter 1: Did My Teacher Just Call us Turds?
Hey, I'm here for a review. :D My fingers tapped at my desk anxiously as Mr. Lumpert drawled on about… Well, I’m not quite sure. I think it's better to ...
Jan 26, 2016
