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Re: Have You Heard
Hey, I'm here to review (and possibly rip this apart ;))! Have you heard of the well run dry? The bird sang soft, and the night was nigh, but no ...
Mar 6, 2016 -
Re: Dreams of Stars Chapter 15 (Once Upon a Time)
Hey, I'm here again to leave a review! :D Archie had confessed his love to her that day. Is he, really? 'confessed' is such a specific word--it isn't confessing here ...
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Re: Untitled WIP - Prologue
Hey, I'm here to leave a quick review! :D The universe is a truly massive, truly diverse place. You might or might not have heard this, but first sentence in ...
Mar 5, 2016 -
Re: You and Me and Infinity
Hey, I'm here to give you a quick review! :D I wanted to say goodbye But it wouldn’t fit around the infinite silence Trapped between my teeth And what’s the ...
Mar 4, 2016 -
Re: Leo
Hey, it's me, also here to leave a quick review. :D I'll be honest; I don't really get what this poem's about. When I first saw the poem, I thought ...
Mar 4, 2016 -
Re: A Bishop's Perspective
Hey, I'm here to leave a quick review! :D To think that they should be above me, a man of the Church, imbued with the power of God! I think ...
Mar 3, 2016 -
Re: The Missing Piece
Hey, I'm here to leave a quick review! :D I pretty much adore this poem. I like the message you deliver here, about missing someone dearly and hoping that person ...
Mar 3, 2016 -
Re: Whims of the Soul: Chapter 2
Hey, I'm here for a quick review! :D He winked and nodded and smiled; yes, Theresa, lovely to see you, Theresa. How are the kids, Theresa? Hmm, since the part ...
Mar 2, 2016 -
Re: Dreams of Stars Chapter 11 (Once Upon a Time)
Hey, it's me again! :D Ohmegerd, the drama in here. Everything's so intense, and this is the first time I see Bridget and Hopper having a fight. It's clear their ...
Feb 18, 2016 -
Re: Dreams of Stars Chapter 10 (Once Upon a Time)
Hey, I'm here again. :) She squeezed her eyes more tightly shut and tried to brush it away, but it persisted. This is awkwardly worded. It just doesn't sound right. ...
Feb 18, 2016 -
Re: Dreams of Stars Chapter 9 (Once Upon a Time)
Hey, I'm here to review! :D Anyway. Once I've figured out what Bridget intends to do, I pity her very much! Not only she has to work for Gold without ...
Feb 17, 2016 -
Re: Dreams of Stars Chapter 8 (Once Upon a Time)
Hey! I'm here yet again! :D “I wish I could carry you,” Archie remarked. Way to open the conversation. This is such a funny honesty, and is entirely ironic to ...
Feb 17, 2016 -
Re: Dreams of Stars Chapter 7 (Once Upon a Time)
Hey, I'm here to review again ! :D I just have to say I like the conversation between Bridget and Hopper. She raises an interesting topic, which is Mary Margaret, ...
Feb 17, 2016 -
Re: Fearless
Hey, I'm here for a quick review! :D You have to ride the horse if you want to find the real thrill of the races. From the starting paragraphs, I ...
Feb 17, 2016 -
Re: Dreams of Stars Chapter 6 (Once Upon a Time)
Hey, I'm here to review! :D For someone who hasn't read the chapters before the fifth, I'm pretty curious to know why Kaelin wants to reach the stars. It's pretty ...
Feb 15, 2016
