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Lightsong

  • Poetry » Lyrical, Dramatic Re: Have You Heard

    Hey, I'm here to review (and possibly rip this apart ;))! Have you heard of the well run dry? The bird sang soft, and the night was nigh, but no ...

    Mar 6, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, Fantasy Re: Dreams of Stars Chapter 15 (Once Upon a Time)

    Hey, I'm here again to leave a review! :D Archie had confessed his love to her that day. Is he, really? 'confessed' is such a specific word--it isn't confessing here ...

    Mar 5, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Science Fiction Re: Untitled WIP - Prologue

    Hey, I'm here to leave a quick review! :D The universe is a truly massive, truly diverse place. You might or might not have heard this, but first sentence in ...

    Mar 5, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: You and Me and Infinity

    Hey, I'm here to give you a quick review! :D I wanted to say goodbye But it wouldn’t fit around the infinite silence Trapped between my teeth And what’s the ...

    Mar 4, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Leo

    Hey, it's me, also here to leave a quick review. :D I'll be honest; I don't really get what this poem's about. When I first saw the poem, I thought ...

    Mar 4, 2016
  • Short Story » Historical Fiction, Narrative Re: A Bishop's Perspective

    Hey, I'm here to leave a quick review! :D To think that they should be above me, a man of the Church, imbued with the power of God! I think ...

    Mar 3, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: The Missing Piece

    Hey, I'm here to leave a quick review! :D I pretty much adore this poem. I like the message you deliver here, about missing someone dearly and hoping that person ...

    Mar 3, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Literature, Horror Re: Whims of the Soul: Chapter 2

    Hey, I'm here for a quick review! :D He winked and nodded and smiled; yes, Theresa, lovely to see you, Theresa. How are the kids, Theresa? Hmm, since the part ...

    Mar 2, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, Fantasy Re: Dreams of Stars Chapter 11 (Once Upon a Time)

    Hey, it's me again! :D Ohmegerd, the drama in here. Everything's so intense, and this is the first time I see Bridget and Hopper having a fight. It's clear their ...

    Feb 18, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, Fantasy Re: Dreams of Stars Chapter 10 (Once Upon a Time)

    Hey, I'm here again. :) She squeezed her eyes more tightly shut and tried to brush it away, but it persisted. This is awkwardly worded. It just doesn't sound right. ...

    Feb 18, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, Fantasy Re: Dreams of Stars Chapter 9 (Once Upon a Time)

    Hey, I'm here to review! :D Anyway. Once I've figured out what Bridget intends to do, I pity her very much! Not only she has to work for Gold without ...

    Feb 17, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, Fantasy Re: Dreams of Stars Chapter 8 (Once Upon a Time)

    Hey! I'm here yet again! :D “I wish I could carry you,” Archie remarked. Way to open the conversation. This is such a funny honesty, and is entirely ironic to ...

    Feb 17, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, Fantasy Re: Dreams of Stars Chapter 7 (Once Upon a Time)

    Hey, I'm here to review again ! :D I just have to say I like the conversation between Bridget and Hopper. She raises an interesting topic, which is Mary Margaret, ...

    Feb 17, 2016
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, Other Re: Fearless

    Hey, I'm here for a quick review! :D You have to ride the horse if you want to find the real thrill of the races. From the starting paragraphs, I ...

    Feb 17, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, Fantasy Re: Dreams of Stars Chapter 6 (Once Upon a Time)

    Hey, I'm here to review! :D For someone who hasn't read the chapters before the fifth, I'm pretty curious to know why Kaelin wants to reach the stars. It's pretty ...

    Feb 15, 2016


Time is not your best friend - unless you use it wisely.
— Marco Pierre White