Lightsong

Hey, I'm here to leave a quick review. :D I apologize if I get confused with something I shouldn't should I read the previous chapters. Wow, her intense workout truly ...

Hey, I'm here to review! :D I can not believe it. Inconsistent tense. This part is largely in past tense, so stick with that. It's confusing otherwise. The second thing ...

Hey, I'm here to review! :D “You may call him your father, and I your King,” Catharnach said simply. Wait whut? I thought Catharnach/Mad King is Ailean's father? Or is ...

Hey, I'm here to review! :D I was having trouble seeing where I was going as I ran down the halls of the second floor, letting out painted breaths without ...

Hey, I'm here to review. :D Stretching arms high I try to reach just close enough to brush a wisp of sunrise or to balance the morning dove's song on ...

Hey, I'm here to review as requested! :D I decided to tackle this one first. I just want to start this by saying I can totally relate to your struggle, ...

Hey, I'm here yet again! :D Hope you're not tired of me. ;) Star raises her hand to her chest and, through the blouse, traces her fingers over her father's ...

Hey, I'm here to review. :D I haven't read the past chapters of this novel (I did read some of them, but it has been a long time ago), so ...

Hey, I'm here to review! :D Cecilia opened her eyes, not her actual physical eyes. She called it her “other eyes.” I have a few suggestions here that you can ...

Hey, I'm here to review! :D That fast, she was ready. I'm not sure what you're trying to say here, but the sentence structure is off. I don't know if ...

Hey, I'm here to review! The first time I read this, I didn't notice it was a flash fiction, really. I guess its slow pace made me think it was ...

Hey, I'm here to review! :D “I’d been hoping she’d be with you,” Mr. Hart replied, whatever had been powering him suddenly deflated. This dialogue is kind of weird. I ...

Hey, I'm here to review! :D “Go away, Bird!” I hissed and wrapped the covers around me. I get that you italicize the dialogue to have it sound more emphasized, ...

Hey, I'm here to review! It's been a while since I review this novel - am feeling nostalgic at the moment. x3 Alright, I'm not gonna lie, I'm a bit ...

Hey, I'm here to review! :D I'm caught off-guard when you describe some of the demons as sex-crazed. That's definitely something I haven't encountered in stories about supernatural creatures because ...