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Re: Bullet Wounds
Hello thar, I am Azrael and I am part of the Four Musketeers, pleased to make your acquaintance. I am here to review and reivew I shall. Let's get the ...
Sep 12, 2010 -
Re: Broken Window
Oh, god, in response to this poem (I had to write it, I'm so very sorry): My window may look so very clear, it may look perfect and pretty, like ...
Aug 22, 2010 -
Re: Elizabeth Andrews school of the unknown - chapter two
Okay, I feel like deconstructing this bit by painful bit. Bear with me while I go through this, and I apologise beforehand for any cruel comments. But first, the pleasantries ...
Aug 22, 2010 -
Re: Lost (Gone From Here)
Gosh, I'm not even sure what to say about this. It gives me such odd images in my head. I've seen it in the un-reviewed part for some time and ...
Aug 21, 2010 -
Re: Hindsight 20/20
I'm not sure why, but this poem made me cry. Like literally, my tears flowing freely. I feel so sad and lost after reading it. It's mostly because that's how ...
Aug 19, 2010 -
Re: Misty Eyes: Chapter One (edited)
*Coughs* My, that's quite a large block of text you have there. Could I perhaps ask a small favour for the next time you post something? Please, oh, please, put ...
Jun 17, 2010 -
Re: Magic
I am terrible at poetry, I think I should know, but this poem... I love it. For it is so true. I'm sorry this isn't much of a review. And ...
May 23, 2010 -
Re: A New Chapter
Since you reviewed something of mine, I thought I would repay the favour. :D Well, let's get cracking. :D Grammatical corrections will be in green, spelling in blue and anything ...
May 19, 2010 -
Re: The Empty Lots
Why hello thar, I'm Light_Devil, and today I'll be your resident reveiwer. This is a nice little short story. It is very sweet. Well, then, to the nitty gritty we ...
Mar 29, 2010 -
Re: Eyes
Wow. You actually managed to completely not put in any "the"s! Congrats. You win. :D Also, I like the story. :) It was very nice and sweet. XD So, after ...
Feb 20, 2010 -
Re: Darkness Is Day
Hey, there, Gabriel. :D You said you posted one, so here I am. :D Let's start. My sister ' s music blares from the cars speakers. Thank goodness today she ...
Feb 6, 2010 -
Re: The Obscured (Scene One)
Why hello thar. I am Light_Devil, aka Azrael or LD, and I shall be your reviewer for today. :D And commence! (We open to the main titles . Then we ...
Feb 5, 2010 -
Re: Bioshock: Tenenbaum's Assistant (Chapter 2)
Why, hello thar. I am Light_Devil and I shall be your reviewer today. I haven't read your previous chapter, however, I rather dislike it when I post chapters and they ...
Feb 5, 2010 -
Re: Crescent Scar chapter 1(Edited )
Why hello thar! I am Light_Devil, or Azrael as known by friends, and I will become your reviewer for today (beware this is, but a disguise, :P). And here we ...
Feb 4, 2010 -
Re: Icefire - part 1
Why, hello thar. I am Light_Devil, or LD as some may know me, and I shall be your very own personal reviewer today. :D And onwards we go! Queen Saron, ...
Feb 4, 2010
