Lezuli

Thanks for all of that, I didn't even notice half of that stuff! I'll get right to work fixing it.

Thanks for all of that, I didn't even notice half of that stuff! I'll get right to work fixing it.

Hello! It's time for a review. My first impression of your story was that it was a very complex world that you seemed to have put a lot of effort ...

Thank you for your review! This did help! I'll try and go back and take your suggestions!

Thank you so much for your review! I'm glad you enjoyed this. As for your comments, the first thing was actually right. I meant to use 'said' in that form. ...

Thanks for your review! I'm thrilled you liked it so much! I have more in store for the two of them, so I hope you keep reading. Actually, I did ...

Thank you so much for your review! I'm so happy you like it! About the Bible thing, I didn't actually take any inspiration from it, so its a coincidence that ...

Thank you for your comment! I'm really glad you liked it. When I created it, the foxes don't refer to each other as anything. They're so in sync they don't ...

I didn't really mean for it to come across as a fanfic, I wanted to write about witches and their familiars and I like the cheshire cat so I wanted ...

Thanks for your review, I struggle a lot with showing and not telling and my info dumps, so I'll try and fix that! You've given me a lot to work ...