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Re: Back In Town
Greetings! Just want to write a little review for you. WaterSpout below me covered most of it, so I'm just going to add onto that. #1: This isn't actually something ...
Aug 7, 2020 -
Re: Memento Mori
Ooh, very creepy. I like the rhythm of this poem and the way the words flowed. It was very nice and spooky. I'm not very good with poems, so the ...
Aug 6, 2020 -
Re: The Mal (Ch. 1) (Teaser)
Hello! Time for a review. Let me start out by saying that this was an impressive story. I got sucked right in. The charectors were well-written and their personalities came ...
Aug 6, 2020 -
Re: reset fate worse than death chapter 1
Hello! Just here for a quick little review. The person below me covered most of the formatting and grammatical errors, so I'll just be adding to that. But before we ...
Aug 6, 2020 -
Re: Behind the Blue Moon - Chapter 1: My Teacher Forced Me To Join A Club - Part 2
Hello, there! I'm here for a review! Let's start out by saying that I truly did enjoy this work. Damien is a very interesting character to read. It's fun reading ...
Jul 30, 2020 -
Re: I have seen...
Hello, I'm here for a review. For starters, I really liked the imagery in this poem. I could really see the scenes depicted here. #1: Just some little nitpicks about ...
Jul 30, 2020 -
Re: The Siren That Sung On Two Legs
Hi, just wanted to write a quick little review for you. I'm not very good at poetry review, but I hope this helps regardless! 1: To start out with, this ...
Jul 30, 2020 -
Re: The Harvest - Prologue
Hello! Just wanted to write a quick review. This will be short since the one below me already covered the grammatical things. Anyway, just a few things to keep in ...
Jul 13, 2020 -
Re: Enarum: Lost Souls, Before the beginning (chapter 1)
Hello! I'm here to give a quick review for you. All right then, with no further ado: #1: This story is quite nice, I really love characters like Quinton who ...
Jul 9, 2020 -
Re: Chapter 1 - A New Path
Hiya! Wanted to write a quick review for you! For starters, this story has all the makings of an excellent fantasy/medieval novel! I can't wait to see where you go ...
Jul 9, 2020 -
Re: Chapter 1: The Aftermath of War [Her Feathers of Grief & Darkness]
Hiya! Just wanted to review your work here. Right off the bat, I really liked your story. The descriptions of both the setting and the M.C were vivid and sucked ...
Jul 2, 2020 -
Re: Corrupted Courage Chapter 8
Hi! Just wanted to write a quick review for you! First of all, I love this story! It's a totally awesome concept and idea, I love stories where good and ...
Jul 2, 2020 -
Re: The Rosemallow Princess: Chapter 2
Hi, I don't know if this is too late for a review or not, but I just wanted to point out a few things. 1: “Better not be caught by ...
Jul 2, 2020