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  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: i'm the ashes falling into the tray

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    The opening lines paint a vivid picture of fragility and impermanence, likening the poet's existence to ashes gently descending into a tray. It conveys a sense of insignificance, as if ...

    Jul 12, 2023
  • Poetry » Realistic, Romantic Re: jade

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    In "She Says She Loves Me," the poet takes us on a captivating journey through the intricacies of love, capturing the essence of vulnerability, selfish desires, and the profound connection ...

    Jul 12, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Humor Re: The Many Gifts of Malia--Part 106: "The Unblessed"

    The chapter you have presented is a conversation between several characters, In this chapter, Malia has lost Lazuli, her favorite toy, while using her as a sniffer. Tarrha, the love ...

    Mar 28, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Humor, Fantasy Re: The Wizards and the Desk Pets 1-the stolen magic-chapter 3

    Keep in mind, this is my first time reading any of these, so feel free to dismiss all of my criticisms, let me know if anything I say was actually ...

    Mar 28, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Conqueror Rising: Chapter 3.5 [old]

    Overall, the story has a clear plot and well-defined characters. The dialogue is effective in revealing the characters' personalities and relationships with each other. The scene where Solea breaks do

    Mar 26, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: deleted

    I do notice that this is pretty short, especially for a Novel Chapter, but even so it was pleasant and quaint. As you could guess I have never read any ...

    Mar 19, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: The Lost Dragon Chapter 9 (LMS VI)

    Ok, I am relatively new to reviews and I have never read any of this ever. BUT I saw the cover art and wanted to check it out instantly. Speaking ...

    Mar 9, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Humor, Teen Fiction Re: Dust Storm: Chapters 1-5

    I mean, WOW! I love the characters so far, I really think that the characters serve their own purpose. most of what there is to see here is really well ...

    Mar 1, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Politics, General Re: We Are the Ninety-Nines (Working Title) - Chapter 1

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    a aa aaa aaron ab abandoned abc aberdeen abilities ability able aboriginal abortion about above abraham abroad abs absence absent absolute absolutely absorption abstract abstracts abu abuse ac academi

    Feb 8, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Supernatural Re: Secrets of Ravenhill

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    For anyone who has taken the time to manually count the number of words on a page of paper, you know it’s both time consuming and frustrating. There has to ...

    Feb 8, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Horror, Mystery / Suspense Re: The Mist: Chapter One

    I like how mysterious this is, the appearance of the five letters at the end gave me goosebumps. I do wonder who this Brook person is to Albert, as she ...

    Feb 7, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Prologue : Hero

    It's weird, I have a very mixed opinion on hero's. but I think that they definitely need to show more, as there are different sides to people that are never ...

    Feb 7, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Humor Re: Voidish Tendencies Chapter One

    I really like this writing style! the "logic goblin" line made a chuckle a little, and I really like the setting. I did take notice that the main character went ...

    Feb 7, 2023


He who knows only his own generation remains forever a child.
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