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Re: i'm the ashes falling into the tray
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Jul 12, 2023
The opening lines paint a vivid picture of fragility and impermanence, likening the poet's existence to ashes gently descending into a tray. It conveys a sense of insignificance, as if ... -
Re: jade
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Jul 12, 2023
In "She Says She Loves Me," the poet takes us on a captivating journey through the intricacies of love, capturing the essence of vulnerability, selfish desires, and the profound connection ... -
Re: The Many Gifts of Malia--Part 106: "The Unblessed"
The chapter you have presented is a conversation between several characters, In this chapter, Malia has lost Lazuli, her favorite toy, while using her as a sniffer. Tarrha, the love ...
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Re: The Wizards and the Desk Pets 1-the stolen magic-chapter 3
Keep in mind, this is my first time reading any of these, so feel free to dismiss all of my criticisms, let me know if anything I say was actually ...
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Re: Conqueror Rising: Chapter 3.5 [old]
Overall, the story has a clear plot and well-defined characters. The dialogue is effective in revealing the characters' personalities and relationships with each other. The scene where Solea breaks do
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Re: deleted
I do notice that this is pretty short, especially for a Novel Chapter, but even so it was pleasant and quaint. As you could guess I have never read any ...
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Re: The Lost Dragon Chapter 9 (LMS VI)
Ok, I am relatively new to reviews and I have never read any of this ever. BUT I saw the cover art and wanted to check it out instantly. Speaking ...
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Re: Dust Storm: Chapters 1-5
I mean, WOW! I love the characters so far, I really think that the characters serve their own purpose. most of what there is to see here is really well ...
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Re: We Are the Ninety-Nines (Working Title) - Chapter 1
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Feb 8, 2023
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Re: Secrets of Ravenhill
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Feb 8, 2023
For anyone who has taken the time to manually count the number of words on a page of paper, you know it’s both time consuming and frustrating. There has to ... -
Re: The Mist: Chapter One
I like how mysterious this is, the appearance of the five letters at the end gave me goosebumps. I do wonder who this Brook person is to Albert, as she ...
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Re: Prologue : Hero
It's weird, I have a very mixed opinion on hero's. but I think that they definitely need to show more, as there are different sides to people that are never ...
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Re: Voidish Tendencies Chapter One
I really like this writing style! the "logic goblin" line made a chuckle a little, and I really like the setting. I did take notice that the main character went ...
Feb 7, 2023
