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Leviari

  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic Re: Les Feurs Du Mal

    Heya! Yes Levi is fine ahah x Thank you so much for your review, I totally get what you are saying. I was very insecure about this poem, now I'm ...

    Mar 21, 2020
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Politics Re: The Rich's Man's Side

    I think it really relates a lot to your poem, here's where you can have a quick look in case you are interested: sorry for going all nerd on you. ...

    Mar 21, 2020
  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic Re: Les Feurs Du Mal

    Thank you so much for stopping by! I'm focusing on improving my poem according to your very valid suggestions, I hope the right inspiration strikes soon ahah. Thank you again ...

    Mar 21, 2020
  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic Re: Les Feurs Du Mal

    thank you so much for your review, I truly appreciated your insights and your suggestiona are very helpful! I'll definitely look more into capitalisation and I agree.. I wasn't very ...

    Mar 20, 2020
  • Poetry » Horror, Literature Re: have faith in our fear

    Your verses are amazing, every metaphor is unambiguous and effective. You created a crescendo of images that seems to mirror the crescendo of your own emotions: it starts with your ...

    Mar 19, 2020
  • Poetry » General, General Re: True poetry is in the drafts

    Thank you for your generous advice! I'll absolutely take your suggestions into consideration :) Thank you for your help

    May 9, 2019
  • Poetry » General, General Re: True poetry is in the drafts

    Thank you so much for your feedback! Much appreciated

    May 8, 2019
  • Poetry » General, General Re: True poetry is in the drafts

    Thank you! Much love x

    May 8, 2019
  • Poetry » General, Dramatic Re: I have died a thousand times

    Thank you very much, it means a lot to me :)

    May 6, 2019
  • Poetry » General, Dramatic Re: I have died a thousand times

    Thank you for your feedback, it means a lot! When it comes to capitalizing, I usually try to match it up with the punctuation more than the actual position of ...

    May 5, 2019
  • Poetry » General, Dramatic Re: I have died a thousand times

    Much appreciated :)

    May 5, 2019
  • Poetry » General, Dramatic Re: I have died a thousand times

    Thank you so much!

    May 4, 2019
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: When you look at me

    Thank you for your review, I corrected my punctuation. Your feedback is always very precious!

    May 4, 2019
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: When you look at me

    I love the idea of the shakesparean couple! Thank you for your feedback and you're right, I'm totally adding the full stop.

    May 4, 2019
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: When you look at me

    Thank you so much!

    May 4, 2019


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