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Re: Les Feurs Du Mal
Heya! Yes Levi is fine ahah x Thank you so much for your review, I totally get what you are saying. I was very insecure about this poem, now I'm ...
Mar 21, 2020 -
Re: The Rich's Man's Side
I think it really relates a lot to your poem, here's where you can have a quick look in case you are interested: sorry for going all nerd on you. ...
Mar 21, 2020 -
Re: Les Feurs Du Mal
Thank you so much for stopping by! I'm focusing on improving my poem according to your very valid suggestions, I hope the right inspiration strikes soon ahah. Thank you again ...
Mar 21, 2020 -
Re: Les Feurs Du Mal
thank you so much for your review, I truly appreciated your insights and your suggestiona are very helpful! I'll definitely look more into capitalisation and I agree.. I wasn't very ...
Mar 20, 2020 -
Re: have faith in our fear
Your verses are amazing, every metaphor is unambiguous and effective. You created a crescendo of images that seems to mirror the crescendo of your own emotions: it starts with your ...
Mar 19, 2020 -
Re: True poetry is in the drafts
Thank you for your generous advice! I'll absolutely take your suggestions into consideration :) Thank you for your help
May 9, 2019 -
Re: True poetry is in the drafts
Thank you so much for your feedback! Much appreciated
May 8, 2019 -
Re: True poetry is in the drafts
Thank you! Much love x
May 8, 2019 -
Re: I have died a thousand times
Thank you very much, it means a lot to me :)
May 6, 2019 -
Re: I have died a thousand times
Thank you for your feedback, it means a lot! When it comes to capitalizing, I usually try to match it up with the punctuation more than the actual position of ...
May 5, 2019 -
Re: I have died a thousand times
Much appreciated :)
May 5, 2019 -
Re: I have died a thousand times
Thank you so much!
May 4, 2019 -
Re: When you look at me
Thank you for your review, I corrected my punctuation. Your feedback is always very precious!
May 4, 2019 -
Re: When you look at me
I love the idea of the shakesparean couple! Thank you for your feedback and you're right, I'm totally adding the full stop.
May 4, 2019 -
Re: When you look at me
Thank you so much!
May 4, 2019
