LeutnantSchweinehund

I'll be throwin' a review your direction, matey! Brace for impact! Let me start off by saying that while your tale does have potential (any story can be good, provided ...

One eventually seen by very few. An elusive goal, oh indeed.

Well now, thank you for the review! May well be so. I'll look it over, throw some words around, try'n get some literary experiments going. Gotta practice for eventually writing ...

The meter isn't quite developed yet, indeed. Grammar should be mostly fine though, I put it through Word and no errors were detected, apart for a few issues with syntax, ...

Thank 'ye! Very true. Mostly just dumb typos on my part. I ought to fix those and be more careful next time 'round! Alright, thanks again, my friend! I shall ...

You can edit your work on the upper right side of this page. Just go into editing mode, edit whatever you need to edit, and then save changes. Cheers!

Many thanks! That might very well be correct. I'll add that it applies to many European states instead, because, as you say, I'm not actually sure how poorly supplied the ...

Aaa, thank you very much! I was afraid it would remain without review for ages! Bourgeoisie might have been slightly misused, right that. It's true that I am focusing mostly ...

I'm afraid I haven't the time for a proper review, but reading the first few paragraphs, I can already see a refined style of prose that flows very well in ...

'Ye can't ask someone to focus on grammar whilst using 'u' instead of 'you,' for goodness' sake! Just felt like pointing out the irony. No hostilities intended, just a fair ...

Many thanks indeed! Very nice analysis! I'll edit out the humble brag. Those are remnants of low self-esteem that must be torn out by the root! And the brothers will ...

Thanks! Getting a manifesto reviewed is hellishly difficult, so I appreciate any input I can get! Indeed, it is both a very personal story and the story of myself and ...

Tag me when you publish it. I'm curious to see your work!

Well then! That's actually quite flattering! Yes, of course. You're free to use it as you wish. I'll be glad if you do!

Huh. True that. Now that I look at it, there are a few meter breaks indeed! I'll have to fix that, definitely. Thanks for pointing it out. I feel a ...