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LeonineLisbeth

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  • Short Story » General, Teen Fiction Re: Garden Heart

    Great-- thanks for the advice. I'd like to try re-drafting this piece in different narrative voices, and try to get that idea across. After thinking about it, I think you ...

    Nov 1, 2017
  • Short Story » General, Teen Fiction Re: Garden Heart

    Thanks so much for taking the time to read this-- I appreciate the review! I see what you're saying about the whole Madeline thing. Do you perhaps have any advice ...

    Oct 31, 2017
  • Short Story » General, Teen Fiction Re: Garden Heart

    This was a small creative writing piece I was required to do for school, so I understand that it is quite short. I'd like to properly expand this and work ...

    Oct 31, 2017
  • Short Story » Romantic, Teen Fiction Re: L:ove

    sorry-- my review twice for some reason ^^; just ignore this!

    Oct 31, 2017
  • Poetry » Romantic, Realistic Re: Leaves

    Oh! Hahaha I didn't pick up on that! It did make me laugh though XD

    Oct 31, 2017
  • Poetry » Romantic, Realistic Re: Leaves

    Ah, even more beautiful!!! :D I've been doing this online writing course for the last few weeks, and one thing that I've learned is if you think something is wrong, ...

    Oct 31, 2017
  • Other » General, General Re: To The Boy In The Casket...

    Thank you for your review. I now see how it would be hard as a stranger to my own journal to review and understand this kind of writing. I'll clear ...

    Aug 23, 2017
  • Other » General, General Re: To The Boy In The Casket...

    QUICK AUTHOR'S NOTE (I could only write so much in my description)-- This piece was written the day after I attended my friend's funeral. The date at the top is ...

    Aug 21, 2017
  • Other » Dramatic, Film Re: "Lion"

    Oh my gosh you've made me so happy. Since this is my first post in a couple of years, I was really nervous. But you've given me great confidence. Thank ...

    Jul 13, 2017
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Wolves of the midnight

    Thanks so much for the review. I understand what you mean. I actually am practicing on touch typing and sometimes I just instinctively press the caps lock button. Oopsies! ;P ...

    Feb 6, 2015
  • Poetry » Literature, General Re: A Storm's calling...

    Thanks for your review! I'm glad you liked it. It mean a lot to me for you to take the time to review, so thanks for that! :D

    Feb 4, 2015
  • Poetry » Literature, General Re: A Storm's calling...

    Yeah I see what you mean. Thanks for those tips, I'll make sure I remember that for the future! Thank you SO much for taking the time to review! :D

    Feb 4, 2015
  • Poetry » Literature, General Re: A Storm's calling...

    Thanks for the EXTRA long review! Means a lot to me! I'll keep that in mind for the future. Thanks for the tip! :D

    Feb 4, 2015
  • Poetry » Literature, General Re: A Storm's calling...

    Thanks so much for reviewing! It means a lot to me! And yeah, I know my punctuation kind of sucks XP I have been trying to work on it, painfully ...

    Feb 4, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: The Despair of a Broken Heart.

    Well I died from feels overload reading this. T_T This was beautiful! I love it!

    Feb 3, 2015


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