LeonieLacey

Hi! Thanks everyone for the reviews! Storyweaver,i see what you mean about that wording and the word 'red'...kinda off; thanks for pointing it out, i'll think about this one and ...

Hi lilymoore,thank you for reviewing this. In response to your first point, i agree with you about it because i didnt realise that before. However, i think that if i ...

Thanks everybody! Hi Solvalery, yes, you're right, I love my Cello. I've only been playing it for a few months, but its great, i love all string instruments really. I ...

Wow really good for a first poem...especially like the ending. Well done!!

Thank you Green Eyes, thats very nice of you, I appreciate it :)

Thank you, Tariq Muhammad, for the review, I appreciate it very much. I understand what you mean by the 'possibly mistaken non-mistakes' and I will make some changes. Again, thanks, ...

Yeah, it must have taken you ages to write out all those GEORGES'. Not that you didn't enjoy it for KEVIN, I give no comment. I think you know what ...

Thanks pazey13, i'm glad that people can relate to this poem, i got the idea from a book talking about the difference between love and infatuation, and the rest just ...

You can deny it all you like Leonie, but the truth is *Sings* YOU WANT TO LOVE HIM! YOU WANT TO KISS HIM! YOU WANT TO HUG HIM! *Sings* Muhahaha!! ...

WAHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!! I love this one! Was it Goulash that inspired you ;] ? Hah! But seriously I do love this poem!! Upload the one about No mans land! Chynel. Not ...

Haha, yeah i was laughing actually-err no.....does B1 read poetry? i think he'd be stunned if he knew that you wrote this. B1 doesn't know what he's missing. Spectacular!

This poem is brilliant! i disagree with the comment above about 'doubly' being not a good word to use in poetry, i think the last line is a great conclusion ...

You didn't lose the one about the clock-i really like that one, its so nice, its like 'tick tock, the clock strikes one, tick tock something, something i forget what ...

Thanks for the really nice comments everyone, it's very encouraging!

'Asstounds' no, i think thats how it's normally spelled! Elvis? How random! I think it was more like a couple who had been married for many years, and now their ...