Lena

[s]Curiously timid,[/s] Lily Andrews timidly[b] rushed through the [s]locker adorned[/s] halls of Peters[s]V[/s][b]v ille High, keeping a wary eye out for any teachers or h [s]H[/s]all m Monitors who

[s]The sound of a constant annoying beeping sound awoke her[/s] She was awoken by a constant beep. [s]Beep...beep... beep...[/s] She groaned and opened her eyes. At first, everything was blurry, ...

Gruß Dich! Chapter II: Guilty The first rays of light were [s]only but[/s] beginning to break through the dark [s]of night[/s], and the cold morning air covered the city in ...

Sorry, I didn't read the whole thing. It's too long and I'm tired. I worked all day. Anyway, in case you really forgot the name of the 'Lady's Choice' dance, ...

I'm sorry to start this off on such a negative point, but I absolutely despise vampires. Ever since Twilight became such a big hit, all the young writers are writing ...

It was an odd scene displayed on the far side of the riverbank. The guard on duty was puzzled by it. Only minutes ago, stumbling through the rotting shrubbery, the ...

Marissa stared at Colt as he finished telling her what [s]had[/s] happened. She shook her head in disbelief. "So your saying that someone murdered the CEO of Masson and Co. ...

It was Morning in the city of Derc, and the dim light that had begun to climb over the looming mountains[s];[/s] bathed the city in a mellow gold. Only the ...

EDIT: this top part was written the next day, and with a more civil mind. Ok, this was taken by a 'stupid idiot' standpoint, in reality I sort of understand ...

“Riley stop worrying,” exclaimed Sam. My version: "Riley, stop worrying," said Sam. 'exclaimed' doesn't really fit because he's not really explaining anything! “How can I not worry?” I asked.

As I walked to the lunch hall one Tuesday, I was aware that heads were turning in the corridor. I noticed that people who were huddled in their tight little ...

Ok, I'm going to edit this whole thing. This is gonna take all day---because it's long, not because it has a lot of errors. If I edit a lot, that ...

I was so excited when I saw you'd posted the next chapter! I really like your work. The alley was next to Courtney’s house and an apartment complex. It passed ...

I'm going to start out by saying that you are an excellent writer, far better than me. I really don't care if you ignore all of this, it's your story ...

I was going to write a detailed response for this piece until I read it. In my opinion, you should proofread your writing at least a little bit before publishing ...