LemonyIce

Awesome! Though I have a few things to tell you. Where you have written: As I walk, The lonely road, A boy joins me, He too, Has insomnia. Here, I ...

This is such a sweet poem!!! I love it! Its awesome! However, just one thing I would like to tell you. The part where you say: Easily, He makes it ...

Hey there! I read this and guess what? Just a few hours back I wrote a poem just like this. Though of course I wrote that before reading this. It's ...

Hi there! I am reviewing your story today! I think this story was a little too overboard. I mean, how can her leg come off completely just because of the ...

This poem is amazing! In one paragraph how you just took a simple everyday object and made a poem out of it is just so cool! And that's a pretty ...

Okay, this was really good, but I have a couple of things to tell you. Firstly where you say "In its sweetness lies those fruits." Here, I think instead of ...