Legend46

I don't find it distracting.

I didn't mean to post that review again sorry something went wrong.

The story is a little confusing. I think you could add a little bit more details. Maybe you could explain why they were studying the baby and teenagers. Also you ...

This story is really interesting.

I disagree with you, ironspark. This is a very good poem. I like the phrase " when the people are just whispers in the night." I can just imagine it, ...

Overall I like the story. It's really interesting. Negatives : You could explain the conflict between the three towns a little better. I hope you keep writing.

I like that you are very descriptive. All the details help "paint" a picture in your mind. I can't wait to read more. Keep Writing!

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This a really good story.