Lee0z

You're a very brave soul. Rhyming constantly would be something that would make this poem even more wonderful, but make sure the words fit. Your description of cutting is very ...

Hi, I'm Lee, here to review! By the way, before you read, I haven't read any other chapters, but something about this has intrigued me, so here I am. First ...

Hey Mith, So your first paragraph and line and how the first paragraph starts and ends with blood, I have to say, was really cool. Okay so you could add ...

Hey MRHILL92, I’m here to review your story, or at least the first part. Okay, so this is your first fantasy story, let’s see how it goes… Now, don’t ask ...

Hey tacoguy1988 I have to say, I absolutely love your title. It is so intriguing. It’s nothing cliché or anything. And while I was searching for something to read, I ...

Hi Birkhoff! With every one of your paragraphs, I will have a paragraph of my own to say what I think about that paragraph and give ideas. I found your ...

Hi IntelligentQuill I’m here to review this work  While your title is straight to the point, you could give a better title, Necessitous Feline, for example (I know that ...