Layleun

What a coincidence! I'm on the third book, now. As a matter of fact I just stopped reading to come on the computer =P They really are amazing books. I ...

Animorphs? I've never heard of them before =( I'll have to get them out of the library some time ^.^

O_o You don't know what a senior is? A senior is a person in twelfth grade. As for the "Freshmen obey them" part....... HAH! Not us ^.~ We torment to ...

Ummm...... chatspeak much? I can't understand it. If you posted it in just letters I'll read it and critique this. Other than that I'm sorry to say that this hurts ...

Give in to temptation!! Read again! I am ^.~ I'm halfway through Twilight and this is my.....well I lost count after ten or so =P, time reading it.

Good. I would avoid the pain and again rhyming for future reference. That is, unless you say "A-gain" instead of "uh ghen" Very good. ~Lupe

God's Debris: A Thought Experiment by Scott Adams. It all makes sense XD A very intriguing book.

Very good, Lee. The overall rhythm was a bit choppy. There wasn't any real structure but you did, however, break off at the right times. The content was definitely awesome. ...

Ha! I remember that! I had my goggles there too, so did Frenchie. And my flippers XP Good times

Hoist the Colours?! You're my new favorite person! Yay for pirates! ~[~Lupe~]~

Jacob is mine and I want Edward to be with Bella ^^ ~[~Lupe~]~

I liked the way you cut off the sentences. It made sense to me where and how you cut. The ninth, tenth and eleventh line I didn't care for totally ...

Hmm.. I'd put more actions in it. It's pretty much all talking. Make the people move around a bit, look around a bit here, kick a table here, stuff like ...

I've just about finished it. I love it so far. Ahhhh, I can hear your thoughts now.... 'If you haven't finished it, why the hell are you on the stupid ...

Well, like Clau said, it doesn't make sense to stupid people like myself. I don't get it, to me it just looks like a quote =( Lo siento