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Very good! It really gets across the harshness of that way of life. easy to read and enjoyable. good choice of words, I've read a bit of poetry and some ...

Very nice, good idea. I agree with Tenyo, watch out for the tenses such as - rush of hatred consumed me - Consumes* Tragedy is always a great way to ...

If interveiwee means what i think it does, i'd replace it with applicant or something similiar, its easier to read. By the by forgive me, for not introducing myself earlier ...

Very good, a few spelling errors but nothing a fine toothed combing couldn't fix. unique story, i like Brody a lot, he's very...umm...human. haha. A lot of story's that include ...

Shows great promise. I have problems with random caps as well haha. I read the series way back when and enjoyed it. Everyone loves a case of 'evil father' if ...

Beautiful. m particualry like - Let me go, let me go, I cannot breathe the air below! And the mass is quite responsive: For the Bible tells me so. don't ...

Very intriguing - “There have been twelve dicloniun gods and goddesses in our history; Eros, Aldess, Toras, Essvora, Nalas, Kaltan, Ciden, Ackar, Dekcklor, Mieldath, Infernotus, and Malafor. - I wou

I certainly enjoyed it, the only problem I noticed with the actual typing was a little spelling error - here that beautiful voice. - Hear Other than that, wonderfully done. ...