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We All Fall Down
This is my first short story. Any advice/corrections are much wanted....oh and if any of you could please point out where I need to start a new paragraph that would ...
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Bruised Spirit
The cup broke!I wasn't to blame!It was your fault,yet you will for shame!"You make me sick,"you rant and rave,and all I can thinkabout is the affectionI crave.Why don't I makeyou ...
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The Lion Kills
Hi, guys! I would sincerely love you to critique this one -laydra The Lion Kills Hate is like the lion, ripping into its prey and destroying the spirit, unrelenting in ...