LawsonJ

Thanks for the review. I shall adjust the faulty meter. You are correct that Europa is separate to Taurus, but as Palilicium is the brightest star of the constellation, and ...

I appreciate the review, and agree with all your points. Changes shall be made accordingly. Cheers!

Thanks for the review. Those lines sounded a little grating as I wrote them, but I'm not overly used to writing rhyming poetry. I shall have a rewrite to create ...

Thanks for the review. I agree with you on most points, especially on the first two sentences. But would you mind, perhaps, clarifying exactly what you meant displacing 'butterfly wings'? ...

You're very kind. Thank you for the feedback.

Thats for all the reviews everyone! I was just wondering though how many people spotted my subtle word trick about 'those inverted to the Devil' - 999 being the inversion ...

Thanks for the reviews! I may revise the story. And no, I don't write poetry.