Lauren2010

Sacred! YO. Man, this story keeps throwing me curveballs, and I love it. I was surprised at first to find us suddenly in the first person (because I can be ...

Sacred! I sat down this morning to knock out my reviews for the week and thought to myself, what should I review? And I remembered I had more chapters of ...

Hi DeepCrystal! Back again for chapter two~ Man, this Kieran guy. I am SUPER suspicious of him. He seems way too charming for his own good, and I'm interested to ...

Deep Crsytal! I have to confess, I saw chapter two of this story in the green room and thought to myself "man, that title sounds familiar" and lo and behold, ...

Hi Lareine! I should have held off on my comments about more details on Lilli's scar xD I continue to forget that this chapter is posted in multiple small parts. ...

Hi Lareine! I totally dig Lilli in this chapter. Her thoughts and observations on the things around her are top notch. We get such a strong image of her bedroom ...

Hey Sacredlege! Thanks for recommending your story to me, it's a really excellent start. I'm going to do my best to catch up, and continue to follow if you post ...

Hi Lareine! You can thank @Holysocks for recommending your novel to me as one to follow! I'm making an effort to review regularly this year so do please add me ...

Hi DarthAntRin! Whoa. I love the way this story shifts from one place to another. It's kind of dreamy or unreal and gives the whole story a sense of mystery. ...

Hey Jyva! You certainly have a strong grasp of writing action sequences, which can be so hard to pull off. I wasn't ever confused about what was happening. I could ...

Hi bookishminecrafter! This was hilarious xD I do have a soft spot for the original ending of Of Mice And Men (Steinbeck ilu), but I really enjoy the route you ...

Hey there, Adler! Lauren here for a review~ Man, I am so impressed with the world you've begun to build here. I love the way you open with the book ...

Hi SirLight! I don't think I've read, let alone reviewed, any of your work before. So I'm glad to be here! This is such a lovely poem. I'm particularly fond ...

Hello maisewriting! Man, this was awesome. You have a great knack for descriptions, especially when it comes to setting a scene. Every description was interesting and specific, which makes the ...

Hi there, Dracula! You know, it's not often I find a doubter-of-magic story that is as enjoyable as this one. Usually it's overly-dramatic, or we know exactly which side to ...