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Hi there Bloodink! That's really cool that you adapted quotes for this poem! Where are they from, if I might ask? It kind of reminds me of when people take ...

Here as requested (and so sorry for the delay D:)! I skimmed the other reviews, so hopefully I won't repeat anything. ^^ I enjoyed this piece overall, and it seems ...

Hi there brokenStrings! You have a lot of great information in this essay, and it's great that many of the facts and date you include are from reputable sources (and ...

First off, there were quite a few scattered grammatical errors throughout the piece. For example here: "It'll never happen. You know Cap'n. When the countdown buzzed, all hell would break ...

Hi shoaib! This is such a lovely poem. The imagery is crisp and powerful (I especially liked the second and third lines!). You obviously have a nice handle of language ...

Hello Twit! And congratulations! You've won my 400th review (which is incredibly unimportant, but still!). Of course you would trap me in with a first chapter. ;P There's so much ...

Hey Panda! This is quite the lovely poem! I really like your imagery and use of language to convey a mental picture to the reader. I could picture everything so ...

Beeeeeckiiiiiiii! Why is this so adorable? The very end is definitely my favorite part - sooooo cute! though I might axe the last two lines for greater comic effect - ...

Becki! Gaah what an adorable conceit. I love love the idea of this kind of relationship, because there are so many times relationships just pop up like this under the ...

Hi IntelligentQuill! This was such a cute little story! I'm such a cat person, and so I appreciated getting to read such a sweet story about a cat and his ...

Hey there JCK! This story reminds me so much of an Arthurian romance (you know, King Arthur, round tables, dashing knights, etc). If you've not read any of the stories ...

Hey there wakegirl! I see you suffered some issues with your line breaks! It was a problem before YWS' renovation was finished, but it might actually work alright now if ...

Hey ToxicRabbit! This is a really interesting poem. I like how you alternate between traditional stanzas and one-line questions. It gives it an interesting effect, and I think it supports ...

Hey Thespiman! I have to say, you had me laughing several times through this! The one-liners and banter were great, and who doesn't love banter? I'd read an entire novel ...

Hey again, Kimmybee! I just reviewed another piece of yours, when I noticed this one woefully unreviewed as well! And thus, I am here to offer my insight yet again ...