Lauren2010

Here I am, again! Ooooh boy, what a mother. I really like the way her character has gone, this sort of trying-hard-to-be-perfect mother who still clearly loves her kids and ...

Hello again! Let's get right to it, shall we? It had been hard to tell Everen about Shandi’s plan, but Kerra had done it. Everen! I had nearly forgotten about ...

Oh, hello again old friend! I've fallen desperately off of my reviewing game, but here I am in an attempt to catch up before RevMo ends. First off, I'm really ...

OH BOY HERE WE GO Going to the surface, now there's a bit of plot! Overall, I think in the next draft you can combine this chapter with the previous ...

Hello again! Oh boy, the scene setting you're doing here is fabulous. I could perfectly picture this place with all the greenhouses and these seven kids shoved into a service ...

HERE I AM, BACK AGAIN I'm so sorry for getting so far behind >.< but I am going to just FLY through these and get all caught up. Alright? Alright. ...

Hey there, Sonder! Back again to get all caught up. I am very suspicious of this Agent West character, and these pills he passed off to Eli. Are these related ...

OMG I adore your author's note xD very daring and brilliant approach to first drafting. The headline read: SUPERVILLAIN PYRO IN CRITICAL CONDITION AFTER POWERS BETRAY HIM Ooooooh, so Eli ...

Awww mom to the rescue!

HERE I AM back again after a million years. I'm so sorry for falling behind, but I am going to try to knock these out as fast as I can ...

Hello again! Oh man, I know we met a lot of characters but I adore all of them. I really like the way you identify each of them with nicknames ...

Hello friend! AH, my HEART. UGH. I love character breakdowns. Even though it's still early, I really feel for Eli in this moment having suffered this big potential loss of ...

Hello again, my dear! I remember this flashback! It's such a sweet memory for Rosalie, and I can see why she's been holding onto it for so long.

Hello my darling! Oh dear, Rosalie

Hello again! God before I forget again I meant to ask last time: do all the triplets have synthetic skin? Were they all born with the same skin condition? Or ...