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  • Novel / Chapter » Historical Fiction, General Re: Midnight Story *prologue*

    Yay, more historical fiction! :D The board has been so slooow . Anyway, hi, nice to meet you. I'll just jump straight in... Brisk footsteps followed Georgiana into the forest. ...

    Jan 6, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Bloodlust - Preface

    Hi :) This looks promising! Let me see... Why did he send me here? Frustration and uncertainty filled my every bone. This is a good intro. I was intrigued. Is ...

    Jan 5, 2009
  • Short Story » Historical Fiction, General Re: To Avenge My Family

    Hello again :) Posting so soon? Night couldn’t have come sooner; I didn’t plan to stop though ach, kind of felt like you jumped straight in there, maybe explain, though ...

    Jan 5, 2009
  • Short Story » Historical Fiction, General Re: To Avenge My Family

    Hi, nice to meet you. :) I'm going to sort of do this in chunks. An experiment. Sorry if I make a pig's ear of it. I stood across from ...

    Jan 5, 2009
  • Short Story » General, General Re: A Walk in the Park

    I liked this. It was fun to read, lightweight of course but that isn't necessarily a bad thing. Sometimes we need to read this sort of thing to make us ...

    Jan 4, 2009
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Orli and Eden (2)

    A very intriguing introduction -- I wondered a moment if I was reading a different story. But ah, no. Now I'm wondering how this links in, and that's good. The ...

    Jan 3, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: nvm 5

    Hello XxBrokenVainxX, nice to meet you :) There was a lot to read. I think that's why this is the first review. Or maybe it just looks that way due ...

    Jan 3, 2009
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Couple in a Cafe

    All right, I'm not going to put it so baldy and unkindly as the reviewer above :roll: , but I'll admit I see her point. This could have been far ...

    Jan 3, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Orli and Eden (1)

    Kirsten, after your many critiques of my work, I thought your own deserved some attention. I'm glad I decided to review this, because it really is exceptional. 8) I love ...

    Dec 28, 2008
  • Article / Essay » Review, General Re: The Kiterunner

    My mum has this book and raves about it. She's always lending it out to her friends like it's the best thing ever. Apparently it's a beautiful but sad book. ...

    Dec 23, 2008
  • Article / Essay » Review, General Re: Great Expectations

    Hi :) I did this for my Eng Lit GCSE and really couldn't warm to the book, but I put that out of mind and told myself: Look, have an ...

    Dec 13, 2008
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Tipping The Velvet {one}

    Hurrah! This is my kind of fiction. Fabulous --- not perfect but fabulous. :shock: I loved the whole old-fashioned feel to it; the way it was the written, the dialogue, ...

    Dec 11, 2008
  • Article / Essay » Review, General Re: What is the Best Book you have read...

    I'm an absolute classics-nerd, so would have to say Jane Eyre by Charlotte Bronte or Middlemarch by George Eliot. In terms of contemporary fiction, I loved Atonement by Ian McEwan, ...

    Dec 8, 2008
  • Short Story » Historical Fiction, General Re: Piano Forte

    Hi, Winter's Twelfth Night, and a merry welcome to YWS! I must say, what a fascinating little tale you've written; really enjoyable to read. It reminded me a lot of ...

    Nov 29, 2008
  • Short Story » General, General Re: First night in Ecuador

    Hi, Caroline. I'm sure there's no rule on it, but don't you think it's a bit daft to post such a small piece? Is there nothing more to it? Or ...

    Nov 26, 2008


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