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Two minute poem! I have one of those too. The dictionary probably is a good idea, I just though of that word on the spot. Actually, I think a thesaurus ...

You may disagree, but this is my point of view on this poem.

Ah, I see. Well, no need to apologize it is your poem. And it does clear things up a little, thanks. ^^

Sure, have fun with that,

I've changed the chapter, is it any better?

Thank you so much!

That's twice a reviewer had asked me to expand it, so maybe I will! Thanks so much for this review, Rae!

I will never stop writing. xD. Thanks for the review!

Thank you!m

O.o I will get rid of the full stop, thanks for your review!

Aw, thanks Firegirl.

Actually, I can see your point about the imagery. As for the period...a previous reviewer suggested that. But I think I might develop this further. Thank you Audy!

Ah thank.you for the review, but it is meant to be blatant. I delibrately set it up so is blunt to get the message across.

Thanks Dreamy!

Thank you!