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Laure

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  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: A land not so far away

    Thank you!

    Jan 7, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Glass Maiden - [chapter one]

    Hey Aria, thanks so much, I will definitely take these wonderful opinions into consideration as I write my next chapter. :D This really helped me! Thank you so much!

    Jan 7, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, General Re: Saltwater Wounds - Chapter One

    Yay! :)

    Jan 7, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Glass Maiden - [chapter one]

    Thank you so much! I wil take them into consideration! And your story is absolutely stunning! :o

    Jan 7, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Glass Maiden - [chapter one]

    :) thank you so much for reviewing! I will take them into consideration for future chapters! I speak in third person a lot, and gelato! Wish I had some of ...

    Jan 7, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Satire Re: Death

    This is [insert profanity here] brilliant! I'm too intimidated to write a review.

    Jan 6, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Satire Re: Death

    :o

    Jan 6, 2014
  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: The Dreamer

    Sure, love to.

    Jan 6, 2014
  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: The Dreamer

    Hi beeyaay, Laure here to review! This article is spectacular, I love how you have written it! And I can't really find faults with this. I just really love it!

    Jan 6, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Glass Maiden - [chapter one]

    Thank you! :) Waiting is tortuous, you have saved me from it!

    Jan 6, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Health Re: Vanilla and cocoa

    Thank you! :)

    Jan 6, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Silver dawn

    Thank you, that is very flattering. :)

    Jan 6, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Silver dawn

    Yup, I did mean that! As for the rhyme pattern, I wasn't really going for any rhyme but I should probably have. The second paragraph was italicized because it speaks ...

    Jan 6, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Silver dawn

    You are not stupid! Is just me with my insane rambling. Basically, it talks about someone who first gets waken up by bird calls and she stands to see the ...

    Jan 6, 2014
  • Poetry » Horror, General Re: In the Morning

    The pleasure's mine, I aim to do that with my reviews. ;)

    Jan 5, 2014


I have been impressed with the urgency of doing. Knowing is not enough; we must apply. Being willing is not enough; we must do.
— Leonardo da Vinci