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Laure

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  • Novel / Chapter » Narrative, Realistic Re: Confessions- Chapter 1

    Hai, midnight, Laure here for a review! So, when I review I break into two parts. The technical part which includes things like spelling and grammar and then, Content which ...

    May 13, 2014
  • Other » Narrative, Other Re: Rain

    Hai, Laure here for a review. Because the previous reviewers has already pointed out the typos, I will focus mainly on the content. I disagree with Strange when he said ...

    May 11, 2014
  • Article / Essay » Literature, Realistic Re: ....When there's nothing left?

    Hai, Laure here for a short review. I'm going to start off with the technical things and then move onto the content. 'When Rivers run dry,' rivers shouldn't be capitalized ...

    May 11, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Horror, Mystery / Suspense Re: Second Always Comes Last: Swanson [Null]

    Hai, because this work has been sitting in the Green Room and because no one else would review it. .__. I thought I would kick at out of the Green ...

    May 10, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Narrative Re: Suicide Blonde - Chapter 5 - The Return of The Tasteless Advertisement

    *Roars in anger* NONONONONONONONONONON, GET ONLINE, RIGHT NOW. WHERE IS THE REST OF THE CHAPTER? *wails* You are a very very evil author. Anyways, this is going to be a ...

    May 10, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Historical Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: 1

    Hai, Laure here for a review, taken that you have a French background I do apologize for anything I say that has been written in a French manner. (My French ...

    May 10, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Narrative Re: Suicide Blonde - Chapter Four - Choices

    Hai BSF, I promised I would review one of your chapters and here I am! Though ere really isn't much to review. So I will start off with some minor ...

    May 10, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Suicide Blonde - Chapter 3 - Telephone Box

    Is it disturbing, I've been reading this like a drug addict, especially when this type of books isn't usually my thing. Oh well. *grins sloppily and reads on*. I will ...

    May 10, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Horror Re: deleted

    Hai, I'm back again and on with the technical things first. I will point them out as I read along. I pushed through the bush in near silence. Though the ...

    May 10, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Winter Asylum: Chapter One

    Hai Mysteryme, Laure here for a review! Since you said to give you some insight on Aurora's (Rora) 's character, so I thought I would start off with that. I ...

    May 8, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: The Last Breath of Fire, Chapter 5

    My greeting, Zontafer. I have arrived upon hence to give thee a review. So, let's start off with the positives. Because I tend to go on with the technies for ...

    May 6, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Horror, Supernatural Re: deleted

    O_O *mind-blown* This review will probably be different to my previous ones, partially because I can't find any major mistakes and because I really liked it, and partially because I'm ...

    May 4, 2014
  • Poetry » General, Narrative Re: Untitled No. 1

    Hello, here as requested! I'm actually listening to a collection of Studio Ghibli songs as I write this review, so. I'm in an unnatural good mood which may affect this ...

    May 3, 2014
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: absolution

    Hai, Laure here for a review on this wonderful poem as requested, I remember reading this a while earlier and wished to review it. So, I see you have decided ...

    May 3, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, Action / Adventure Re: deleted

    YESSS! I'm the first reviewer! let's hit it off with the technies! Instinct told me I shouldn’t linger here in the bush – the wolf-girl, the cigarette guy and the ...

    May 2, 2014


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