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Re: Party Like A Zombie
I thought that was right good! It's not like you'd expect a zombie poem to be like, not scary but cheery and fun. It's like a kids poem we all ...
Jul 26, 2010 -
Re: Grounded
Grounded. Everyday I'm in my room, Everyday I hit the on snooze, Everyday I go to school, Everyday I don't know what to do. I love love love this! I ...
Jul 26, 2010 -
Re: The Robot Girl
That was so lovely, you put so much emotion into it and made it beautiful. I loved the idea of the comparison to the robot, made you understand how misplaced ...
Jul 26, 2010 -
Re: Miracles
I really really love the last two lines. They're so thoughtful. I love the way this is written. - Clever idea. You said I would be fine. You are. Don't ...
Aug 29, 2009 -
Re: Chapter One
I thought it was really relly good. I loved your use of adjectives. Just from the scent of fresh paint of it you could tell it was highly expensive. I ...
Aug 29, 2009
