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LauraM

  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Party Like A Zombie

    I thought that was right good! It's not like you'd expect a zombie poem to be like, not scary but cheery and fun. It's like a kids poem we all ...

    Jul 26, 2010
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Grounded

    Grounded. Everyday I'm in my room, Everyday I hit the on snooze, Everyday I go to school, Everyday I don't know what to do. I love love love this! I ...

    Jul 26, 2010
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: The Robot Girl

    That was so lovely, you put so much emotion into it and made it beautiful. I loved the idea of the comparison to the robot, made you understand how misplaced ...

    Jul 26, 2010
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Miracles

    I really really love the last two lines. They're so thoughtful. I love the way this is written. - Clever idea. You said I would be fine. You are. Don't ...

    Aug 29, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Chapter One

    I thought it was really relly good. I loved your use of adjectives. Just from the scent of fresh paint of it you could tell it was highly expensive. I ...

    Aug 29, 2009


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