Lashea

Hey, myjaspercat Nice poem you have here. At first I couldn't tell what you were going for but yet you words kept me going forward until I reached the end. ...

I believe this poem is really good but I think you could of used a little more effort into this I really like the way you wrote this, But I ...

I really agree with the other two comments on her your a great writer and I found this poem touching... It almost sent shivers through out me... minor mistakes can ...