Wrong

by TheTaco101

  • Poetry
  • Dramatic

Published February 14, 2012

My times are getting harder
So much time left to barter
Remember me when I begin to fall
Remember me when I begin to bawl

Never have I felt this way
I don't trouble with things I want to say
No burden could there ever be
What is it that you cannot see?

My eyes blur with blood and tears
Let me let go of all my fears
I do not stay for long
How could something so right be turned so wrong?

I do not hate people as they say
I do not despise or allow to sway
I hurt inside, where no one can see
No one can see me

I do not believe in pain
I do not believe in justice to rein
I just believe when all does fail
I will remember who to hail

Do not call apon my name
Only to cause reprove and shame
I do not injure unless hurt
My entire life is burnt

Tears cry, not from sorrow
That shall fade only tomorrow
But of anger
Uncontrollable anger

It never recedes
It never dies away
Inside my heart bleeds
Will I stop from being made to sway?

Does my heart not matter?
Will you cause everything to shatter?
Pick up the pieces and remember me
What is there to see?

I do not know
Where to go
Because I am gone
And I am wrong
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Lashea
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Lashea wrote a review Review · Feb 22, 2012

I believe this poem is really good but I think you could of used a little more effort into this I really like the way you wrote this, But I believe that you forced some of the rhyming in the poem. Overall the picture in this was vivid and good, keep up the good work. I love your writing.

"I do not know
Where to go
Because I am gone
And I am wrong"

This here is my favorite part in the poem and it is amazing, I like it " I do not know where too go... Because I am gone and I am wrong I love it.



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