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Re: The Angel of Death
II love the story. It makes me feel as if I'm in the character's shoes. The dialogue and the modifiers and descriptors are perfectly balanced out. I like the concept ...
Apr 2, 2013 -
Re: The covered ground of deceased~
Great job first stories are always hard. I'm gonna get serious now. I was totally confused through the entire thing. The description isn't that great either. You need to up ...
Apr 2, 2013 -
Re: 911-prologue
Okay so first of all there wasn't much on how the main character was feeling. It had way to much dialogue and not enough feeling. Also like SushiSashimi333 the "it ...
Apr 2, 2013