LadyoftheLetters

Very well written. To me there was a little confusion in the end of the work, but it still was an interesting poem. I reminded me of an old memory ...

Very whimsical, you could also turn it into a fairy tale if you wished to. Very interesting and while short, it was beautiful. Well done, and I'll be on the ...

I loved it. Very much my kind of poem. I like using the moon as material to. I found the use of the two star-crossed couples an interesting take on ...

Very nice, I liked the poem and the way you presented it. I can see why some would become confused on the petals tore line but I understood what your ...