LadySpark

thanks for the reviews guys!!!! they helped alot!

oh you guys are soo nice!!! thanks for your reviews!!!

thank you a.s. for your review:)

this is awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i absolutly love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

okay I'm back to apoligize for being so harsh before :) its awesome

thanks guys! BTW chapter 2 is posted as weel soooooooo.... check it out!!!!!!!!!!

Ok this looks more like a short story not a poem. And its random. I hate randomness (LOL) If this is a real experince i apoligize. If not well im ...

TheJennaRaiton The point of this poem was for the user to answer the questions not tear apart my poem!!!! God that was rude! But whatever you think. But for future ...

I need to know what happened to Dan! i am going crazy!!!!!

hey guys, thanks for your reviews:) i wrote this in the moment and not with future planning or editing. first of all my poem got published!!! i emailed to some ...

dreams?? i have no idea but good poem :)

The imagery is great, but I think you should review and edit the poem and make sure it is really what you are trying to say before posting it. Also, ...

cfakc: yeah the mist idea is right spring fling: i wasnt really thinking what it was about it was somthing that happened to me personaly and i wrote it down. ...

all i can say is LOL and good job!

thank you all! your comments really helped:) and thanks for not being harsh:)