LadySpark

Ok this looks more like a short story not a poem. And its random. I hate randomness (LOL) If this is a real experince i apoligize. If not well im ...

TheJennaRaiton The point of this poem was for the user to answer the questions not tear apart my poem!!!! God that was rude! But whatever you think. But for future ...

I need to know what happened to Dan! i am going crazy!!!!!

hey guys, thanks for your reviews:) i wrote this in the moment and not with future planning or editing. first of all my poem got published!!! i emailed to some ...

dreams?? i have no idea but good poem :)

The imagery is great, but I think you should review and edit the poem and make sure it is really what you are trying to say before posting it. Also, ...

cfakc: yeah the mist idea is right spring fling: i wasnt really thinking what it was about it was somthing that happened to me personaly and i wrote it down. ...

all i can say is LOL and good job!

thank you all! your comments really helped:) and thanks for not being harsh:)

ok here is my review. I'm not going into the grammar right now but i gotta say: great job!!!!!!!! ok thats all :)

i really like this version better. it more feeeling i guess you could say. :) I WANT A REVIEW!

I have a question: how is Draco in the dorm and then at his house?(just asking) I think this story was nice and i like the softer side of Draco ...

ok thank ya and i will check out those rules

first of all pretty good! if this is your poem keep writing. still needs some work

i like this one. ;)))