LadyPurple

Hi! :3 The thing I like is the grammar and punctuation is very good. I love it when people do that. But the structure is kind of off. "You have ...

Hiya! LadyPurple here! Just saw you needed a review here. Alright-y, here we go... Right off the bat I wondered, "Why is this quoted?" But oh well:P it's unnecessary really. ...

We discussed this already. *Glares a bit* But let's try and be nicer this time, huh? Now that I've calmed down. I understand that you want to get your point ...

Everybody, the guy doen't want our help unless we comply to HIS ways. Ignore him. Just let him do whatever, it doesn't matter. Sooner or later he'll go to another ...

I had a friend and an ex-boyfriend come on here. The ex-boyfriend hated the point system. And my friend? She said everyone was too "up-tight" about writing. I pointed out ...

Wow. That was kinda sad. I'm not good at poetry reviewing but I am with some stuff so here goes! She learned it got her waht she wanted, This just...doesn't ...

I understand this. I, myself, am not for it. But I don't say anything unless I'm standing up for them when they're being made fun of. If someone is gay, ...

That was um...very unique I'll admit XD very, very unique. I can't really find any errors with this. Very nice, really. Very funny. Lol I got a laugh out of ...

Wow this is the first review I've done in a while...sorry if I'm rusty. Here goes! Hello! Corrections are in red. She lay back on her hard bed after unfolding ...

Hiya! I'm LadyPurple and I'll be reviewing your story today :) lol okay here goes... multi-racial look about him. ? I'm not sure what that would he black? Dark skinned? ...

'Ello! You seem like a fairly new person. Welcome! I'm LadyPurple and I'm here to review. Haha okay then. Nothing is wrong, really except one thing. Overall, the whole thing ...

Hey! *Puts on reviewing cape* You heart wasn't quite ready I think you forgot the "r" in your. that's all I could find, really. Probably because my reviewing-ness got rusty... ...

Wow. W-O-W! Is there more to this? Lol onto my reviewing. Okay, so I noticed that you left out a space somewhere along the line and while you were in ...

In the second stanza, the narrator is reminiscing - going through different stages of her life and experiences. The first stage shown is childhood. We are given evidence of this ...

Wow. Bravo! That's so...sad:( but you did terrific with this. I hope there's more to this. The only problem I see is that you confused the "your" with "you're" in ...