LadyMysterio

Ack yeah my chapters for messe duo after the update. I thought it just fixed them?? Maybe something didn't update right. Will do a proper response later am cooking dinner ...

YOU DID IT! Thank you. I am impressed. Yeah maybe i'll omit him getting knocked out this last time here and then that would thus leave to a more action ...

oh goodness yeah I know knocking the poor man out lol

I just clicked on this and, you've used my art!! I should scan in that new Devlin drawing I did so you have it too lol

Wait, no, that's not *reviews notes* dang nabit, he's not supposed to find the info their time around. It doesn't exist! Did this not get updated? Hum. That's strange.

Goodness me. It IS confusing isn't it. Honestly it's hard for me to keep track of stuff, but it's getting there. Good to know it's confusing, well not good, but ...

Oh yeah.. his concussion... wheres my script supervisor-oh wait, its me. "The garage scene has my eyes glazing over. We really don't need 7 paragraphs of car types and models. ...

I opened yws mid review and huzzah another! okay this actually had me almost spit my tea out BHAHAH " ;_; i wasn't sure if this was like a hey ...

*Scribbles in notes doc* all good things humm. Many holes. fun times! I feel like theres a bit more.. humm stigma around verena? she can be intimidating at a glance, ...

Ayy a fellow team egg! Hello! And thank you! All good good notes. Most of this stuff has come up before in other reviews which is fantastic!! It means its ...

"It's a real Hans and Anna situation all over again, isn't it?" WAIT IT IS LOLL I didnt even realize. Expect she actually breifly marries him before realizing.. whoopsies. "I ...

"Unspecified to just this chapter, but it seems that your chapters are all posted in opposite order. When I hit next, and at the botttom of the chapters, it keeps ...

Me when editing and reading my own story trying to keep track of what day it is and constantly forgetting "I take back what I said earlier. I didnt realize ...

What can i say, the man likes a sweet treat. thehe. Okay, these are actually great notes on the romance side of things. i literally never write romance and this ...

Mhm k good point. HOWEVER the point of them being paper is so that they can be burnt or easily destroyed in the event that they get discovered. I think ...