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Re: Dear Anonymous (part 4)
Awww. I love this guy. He's adorable! Lovely letter. Stunning, and so touching. If I were Ariel, I wouldn't be writing to the guy demanding his identity, I'd be demanding ...
Jul 16, 2013 -
Re: Dear Anonymous (part 3)
These are so fascinating! What an awesome idea! And Ariel is so spunky and I love her reaction to Anonymous' letters. Sooo fantastic! Anyway, a review would probably be nice, ...
Jul 16, 2013 -
Re: Empress Fallen - Prologue
Hey there. Firstly, this is a very interesting piece. That may sound like I'm scraping for praise, but it really is, and I enjoyed it. As far as the writing ...
Jul 15, 2013 -
Re: Blank Page
Hello there! Firstly, I very much like this poem. It is private and intense and a little sad, the way writing and being a writer feels to me. Now, I ...
Jul 14, 2013 -
Re: swimming.
This was refreshingly simplistic. It reminds me of e.e. cummings and his smaller poems. The message is clear and understandable--gathered from "divulgence" "youth" and "conformity"--but it's also clev
Dec 18, 2012 -
Re: it was never us
A lovely poem. Your abstract imagery was balanced with the concrete, and I loved a) the title and how it relates to your message, and b) the feeling I got ...
Dec 17, 2012
