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LadyLazarus

LadyLazarus

  • Other » Narrative, Romantic Re: Dear Anonymous (part 4)

    Awww. I love this guy. He's adorable! Lovely letter. Stunning, and so touching. If I were Ariel, I wouldn't be writing to the guy demanding his identity, I'd be demanding ...

    Jul 16, 2013
  • Other » Narrative, Romantic Re: Dear Anonymous (part 3)

    These are so fascinating! What an awesome idea! And Ariel is so spunky and I love her reaction to Anonymous' letters. Sooo fantastic! Anyway, a review would probably be nice, ...

    Jul 16, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Romantic Re: Empress Fallen - Prologue

    Hey there. Firstly, this is a very interesting piece. That may sound like I'm scraping for praise, but it really is, and I enjoyed it. As far as the writing ...

    Jul 15, 2013
  • Poetry » General, Literature Re: Blank Page

    Hello there! Firstly, I very much like this poem. It is private and intense and a little sad, the way writing and being a writer feels to me. Now, I ...

    Jul 14, 2013
  • Poetry » Teen Fiction, Culture Re: swimming.

    This was refreshingly simplistic. It reminds me of e.e. cummings and his smaller poems. The message is clear and understandable--gathered from "divulgence" "youth" and "conformity"--but it's also clev

    Dec 18, 2012
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Narrative Re: it was never us

    A lovely poem. Your abstract imagery was balanced with the concrete, and I loved a) the title and how it relates to your message, and b) the feeling I got ...

    Dec 17, 2012


Everything has a consequence and every consequence leads to death.
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