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  • Poetry » General, General Re: 0

    Thanks for your review! :) No, the poems weren't connected, and the capitalization is only terrible because of autocorrect on Word. I'll be sure to change some of the things ...

    Jul 28, 2012
  • Poetry » Humor, General Re: nothing

    It's not that old!:0 but thanks. I'm a huge fan of Poe's poetry (I'm pretty neutral about his stories, though) and I couldn't resist.

    Jun 20, 2012
  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, Dramatic Re: The Curse

    Okay... Nice names (very creative), first of all. I'm wondering if you used Google Translate for this, because the 'you' is only 'vous' if it's plural (like a family). Otherwise ...

    Jun 15, 2012
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: disappointment

    Ooh! Nice ending -I really liked it. There length of the poem was nice; real short, and I didn't have to read a lot. The beginning was okay, but by ...

    Nov 23, 2011
  • Other » General, General Re: Five months of my life.

    Aw! Very inspirational! Good luck with med school! I hope you can find time to pop in on YWS as much as possible. :)

    Nov 23, 2011
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, General Re: nothing

    Okay, sorry about the spacing. One of the reasons I don't like posting stuff that much is because I can never edit -stupid thing keeps scrolling up and down and ...

    Jun 23, 2011
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: nothing

    Okay, people, before anyone starts complainin', I just want to say that I have no clue why the spacing is all whacky. I did my best to make the stanzas ...

    Jun 17, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: The Seven Bloodbaths

    Wow! A poem about vampires! Who'd a thought? Anyway, I liked it. the ending was dramatic, but hey -this is dramatic poetry, non?

    Apr 7, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Two Hypocrites

    Whoa O_e that was a LOT. I'm not sure I quite understood everything, but I can see how you came up with the title, I guess... Good job, otherwise!

    Apr 7, 2011
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: My Fallen Star

    Oh, this poem was so sweet! It made me tear up at the end! Excellent job, keep it up!

    Apr 7, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Shout

    Excellent poem, but I believe you forgot to change the lines -everything was all a big paragraph, and it was hard to tell where a stanza might end!

    Apr 7, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: -Still-

    .Wow. That was beautiful! This poem is truly inspiring! I like the words you used, it brought your poem to life. Keep up the great work!

    Apr 7, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Losing my wings

    Yay! I love this poem! It's so deep and inspiring and stuff!

    Apr 1, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Miss Conception

    Hrmph... Pretty good, I suppose. It could've been a poem! Excellent... job well done.

    Mar 27, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Into Africa (working title)

    Erm... I think you have a thing for Africa. Anyway, good descriptions. I liked the beginning, when Christine was hearing and seeing Africa, but the end with all the hysterical ...

    Mar 27, 2011


fun fact i hear my evil twin once wrote a story about a hacker who used the name fyshi33k bc there are 33k-ish species of fish and she liked phishing so fyshi-33k made sense but then she got super embarrassed when someone forced her to explain
— VyperShadow