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  • Poetry » General, General Re: 0

    Thanks for your review! :) No, the poems weren't connected, and the capitalization is only terrible because of autocorrect on Word. I'll be sure to change some of the things ...

    Jul 28, 2012
  • Poetry » Humor, General Re: nothing

    It's not that old!:0 but thanks. I'm a huge fan of Poe's poetry (I'm pretty neutral about his stories, though) and I couldn't resist.

    Jun 20, 2012
  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, Dramatic Re: The Curse

    Okay... Nice names (very creative), first of all. I'm wondering if you used Google Translate for this, because the 'you' is only 'vous' if it's plural (like a family). Otherwise ...

    Jun 15, 2012
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: disappointment

    Ooh! Nice ending -I really liked it. There length of the poem was nice; real short, and I didn't have to read a lot. The beginning was okay, but by ...

    Nov 23, 2011
  • Other » General, General Re: Five months of my life.

    Aw! Very inspirational! Good luck with med school! I hope you can find time to pop in on YWS as much as possible. :)

    Nov 23, 2011
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, General Re: nothing

    Okay, sorry about the spacing. One of the reasons I don't like posting stuff that much is because I can never edit -stupid thing keeps scrolling up and down and ...

    Jun 23, 2011
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: nothing

    Okay, people, before anyone starts complainin', I just want to say that I have no clue why the spacing is all whacky. I did my best to make the stanzas ...

    Jun 17, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: The Seven Bloodbaths

    Wow! A poem about vampires! Who'd a thought? Anyway, I liked it. the ending was dramatic, but hey -this is dramatic poetry, non?

    Apr 7, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Two Hypocrites

    Whoa O_e that was a LOT. I'm not sure I quite understood everything, but I can see how you came up with the title, I guess... Good job, otherwise!

    Apr 7, 2011
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: My Fallen Star

    Oh, this poem was so sweet! It made me tear up at the end! Excellent job, keep it up!

    Apr 7, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Shout

    Excellent poem, but I believe you forgot to change the lines -everything was all a big paragraph, and it was hard to tell where a stanza might end!

    Apr 7, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: -Still-

    .Wow. That was beautiful! This poem is truly inspiring! I like the words you used, it brought your poem to life. Keep up the great work!

    Apr 7, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Losing my wings

    Yay! I love this poem! It's so deep and inspiring and stuff!

    Apr 1, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Miss Conception

    Hrmph... Pretty good, I suppose. It could've been a poem! Excellent... job well done.

    Mar 27, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Into Africa (working title)

    Erm... I think you have a thing for Africa. Anyway, good descriptions. I liked the beginning, when Christine was hearing and seeing Africa, but the end with all the hysterical ...

    Mar 27, 2011


You are all the colours in one, at full brightness.
— Jennifer Niven, 'All the Bright Places'