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Re: 0
Thanks for your review! :) No, the poems weren't connected, and the capitalization is only terrible because of autocorrect on Word. I'll be sure to change some of the things ...
Jul 28, 2012 -
Re: nothing
It's not that old!:0 but thanks. I'm a huge fan of Poe's poetry (I'm pretty neutral about his stories, though) and I couldn't resist.
Jun 20, 2012 -
Re: The Curse
Okay... Nice names (very creative), first of all. I'm wondering if you used Google Translate for this, because the 'you' is only 'vous' if it's plural (like a family). Otherwise ...
Jun 15, 2012 -
Re: disappointment
Ooh! Nice ending -I really liked it. There length of the poem was nice; real short, and I didn't have to read a lot. The beginning was okay, but by ...
Nov 23, 2011 -
Re: Five months of my life.
Aw! Very inspirational! Good luck with med school! I hope you can find time to pop in on YWS as much as possible. :)
Nov 23, 2011 -
Re: nothing
Okay, sorry about the spacing. One of the reasons I don't like posting stuff that much is because I can never edit -stupid thing keeps scrolling up and down and ...
Jun 23, 2011 -
Re: nothing
Okay, people, before anyone starts complainin', I just want to say that I have no clue why the spacing is all whacky. I did my best to make the stanzas ...
Jun 17, 2011 -
Re: The Seven Bloodbaths
Wow! A poem about vampires! Who'd a thought? Anyway, I liked it. the ending was dramatic, but hey -this is dramatic poetry, non?
Apr 7, 2011 -
Re: Two Hypocrites
Whoa O_e that was a LOT. I'm not sure I quite understood everything, but I can see how you came up with the title, I guess... Good job, otherwise!
Apr 7, 2011 -
Re: My Fallen Star
Oh, this poem was so sweet! It made me tear up at the end! Excellent job, keep it up!
Apr 7, 2011 -
Re: Shout
Excellent poem, but I believe you forgot to change the lines -everything was all a big paragraph, and it was hard to tell where a stanza might end!
Apr 7, 2011 -
Re: -Still-
.Wow. That was beautiful! This poem is truly inspiring! I like the words you used, it brought your poem to life. Keep up the great work!
Apr 7, 2011 -
Re: Losing my wings
Yay! I love this poem! It's so deep and inspiring and stuff!
Apr 1, 2011 -
Re: Miss Conception
Hrmph... Pretty good, I suppose. It could've been a poem! Excellent... job well done.
Mar 27, 2011 -
Re: Into Africa (working title)
Erm... I think you have a thing for Africa. Anyway, good descriptions. I liked the beginning, when Christine was hearing and seeing Africa, but the end with all the hysterical ...
Mar 27, 2011
