LadyEvvy

Okay, review time! I apologize for making this so short, but I didn't find to many errors, so consider my brevity a compliment. First off, I'm really interested in this ...

Alright, review time! First of all, while this is an interesting premise, this passage seems very condensed and to-the-point. We don't get much time to know Shia as a character ...

Hey there! Review time! I like the premise of this story. Mind reading would certainly be a difficult power to handle, especially for a child. I think it's pretty hard ...

Hey there! Review time! I want to start with your introduction. You introduced the situation right away, which I like. It serves as an excellent hook and introduces the read ...

Alright, review time! First of all, I thoroughly enjoyed this. The pacing was just right, and your descriptions were very vivid. I feel like I got a pretty solid idea ...

Okay, review time! To be honest, I've been too shy to review this for a while now. This is a really beautiful story, and I feel so unworthy! Nevertheless, I'll ...

Okay, let's do this! First of all, I really like the concept you have here. Rather than a hero on the rise, this one's been on the decline for a ...

Just realized I reviewed the second part first. I feel a little dumb. Anyway, let's do this! First, I would like to point out how hilarious and adorable Schadel's little ...

Hey! I'm back! Getting right into this, you've created a pretty interesting way to introduce the conflict between Schadel and Liz. You've also made me want to hear more about ...

Hello! How does a little review sound? First of all, I like the way you communicate the narrator's emotions. The use of eye color is very creative. You've already given ...

Hello and welcome to YWS! I'll just leave you a little review. First of all, I like what you have here so far. You introduced the story quite well and ...

And now for part two! I like Schadel's reaction to the flour. It puts a nice highlight on her personality. Speaking of, her personality seems a bit different here than ...

Hello! I have returned for Schadel! I'll review part one before I move on to the rest of the chapter, because this needs to make it out of the green ...

Hello, it's Evvy again! Here to leave another review. First of all, I enjoyed the length a lot more than the previous chapters. I just think that longer chapters are ...

Hello! I'm Evvy, and I'll just leave a little review here for you! First of all, I like how you introduced Sonya's personality. So far I get the impression that ...