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  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Mystery / Suspense Re: Colors (Chapter 1)

    Thank you for the review! I'll use fewer brackets in future and more commas. I do want to say that Ruby is a jewelry brand (I probably shouldn't have named ...

    Mar 3, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Mystery / Suspense Re: Colors (Chapter 1)

    Thank you for the review! It will help my future writing. :D

    Mar 3, 2019
  • Poetry » General, General Re: easily angels

    The color and font makes this one word poem pop with life and creativity. What I want to know is why did you choose this word? What does it mean ...

    Mar 3, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Mystery / Suspense Re: Colors (Chapter 1)

    Thank you for the review! This will really help improve my writing style and content.

    Mar 3, 2019
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Dramatic Re: Oh Bother

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    First of all, I like the cute, airy feel of this poem. It is a really creative - one of a kind kinda poem and I thought it was very ...

    Mar 3, 2019
  • Script » Horror, General Re: Last Autumn (part)

    Thank you for the review! This opened my eyes on how to make it better. :)

    Mar 3, 2019
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: What I Know

    Thank you so much!

    Mar 3, 2019
  • Script » Horror, General Re: Last Autumn (part)

    Thanks. This was just a part of the script. If I post the whole thing it will make sense. I'm glad you liked it. :)

    Mar 2, 2019
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: What I Know

    Thank you for the review.

    Mar 2, 2019
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Circle one

    I have never seen a poem in this format and I loved it. The title caught my attention and I'm glad I read this but maybe tone it down on ...

    Mar 2, 2019
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: What I Know

    Thank you!

    Mar 2, 2019
  • Other » Realistic, Teen Fiction Re: The Teenage Mind. Part 1.

    I would show it to my parents and explain what happened. I know it's easier said than done but it's the right (and in the long run, it is the ...

    Mar 2, 2019
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Drama Queen

    I think a lot of people can relate to this poem. Some of the lines don't rhyme and some do and that makes it feel a bit wonky/bulky but I ...

    Mar 2, 2019


If I have any beliefs about immortality, it is that certain dogs I have known will go to heaven - and very, very few persons.
— James Thurber