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Re: Colors (Chapter 1)
Thank you for the review! I'll use fewer brackets in future and more commas. I do want to say that Ruby is a jewelry brand (I probably shouldn't have named ...
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Re: Colors (Chapter 1)
Thank you for the review! It will help my future writing. :D
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Re: easily angels
The color and font makes this one word poem pop with life and creativity. What I want to know is why did you choose this word? What does it mean ...
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Re: Colors (Chapter 1)
Thank you for the review! This will really help improve my writing style and content.
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Re: Oh Bother
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Mar 3, 2019
First of all, I like the cute, airy feel of this poem. It is a really creative - one of a kind kinda poem and I thought it was very ... -
Re: Last Autumn (part)
Thank you for the review! This opened my eyes on how to make it better. :)
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Re: What I Know
Thank you so much!
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Re: Last Autumn (part)
Thanks. This was just a part of the script. If I post the whole thing it will make sense. I'm glad you liked it. :)
Mar 2, 2019 -
Re: What I Know
Thank you for the review.
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Re: Circle one
I have never seen a poem in this format and I loved it. The title caught my attention and I'm glad I read this but maybe tone it down on ...
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Re: What I Know
Thank you!
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Re: The Teenage Mind. Part 1.
I would show it to my parents and explain what happened. I know it's easier said than done but it's the right (and in the long run, it is the ...
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Re: Drama Queen
I think a lot of people can relate to this poem. Some of the lines don't rhyme and some do and that makes it feel a bit wonky/bulky but I ...
Mar 2, 2019
