Young Writers Society

I've gotten detention before (thrice), but thankfully it didn't occur on any day of great importance. In-school suspension, on the other hand, is considerably worse.
I showed it to my friends who were wondering why I had to go to the front office, it sort of earned me a reputation (probably not in a good way lol).

Now for the actual review:
This is really good, I can totally relate to it, and I'm sure most people can. The first time I got detention I was truly terrified, because before I was that straight-A student and teacher's pet.
Overall, the writing is pretty good. I did find one spelling error, though.

Have you ever felt giulty or pressured for something that you know isn’t that big of a deal, but yet you’re afraid of the unknown circumstances so you find yourself procrastinating for hours on what you should do?

I would show it to my parents and explain what happened. I know it's easier said than done but it's the right (and in the long run, it is the easier) thing to do. I would hate to miss a practice (even though I don't play any of those things) but it's only one time, right? I would go for a walk, watch a show, listen to music, etc to calm down and so I could think properly. I enjoyed this and maybe for your next you could do something on peer pressure. Just a suggestion.
I hope you do more and I'll answer them.

I would show it to my parents and explain what happened. I know it's easier said than done but it's the right (and in the long run, it is the easier) thing to do. I would hate to miss a practice (even though I don't play any of those things) but it's only one time, right? I would go for a walk, watch a show, listen to music, etc to calm down and so I could think properly. I enjoyed this and maybe for your next you could do something on peer pressure. Just a suggestion.
I hope you do more and I'll answer them.

Good tidings to all of you. I am Morgan, the author and maker of The Teenage Mind. I am also new to YWS. If you are wondering what this is all about, then I’ll happily explain it. The work is based on teenage problems. As part of your review, you can answer the question to the dilemma and how YOU would handle it.

I’m not technically grand on making ideas, so if you have a few suggestions on what the next Part and question should be on please, tag me, pm me, or post on my wall. I’d deeply appreciate it. Thank you!