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Hello DG , as a science enthusiast myself reaaaaaaaally liked the metaphors for the states of matter. But as a matter of fact (no pun intended) i really find it ...

Hey Fox evening ^^ you've got an interesting piece here , you excel in establishing the theme and its exposition but i believe you could work on your delivery a ...

Hello Lightsong, I truly enjoyed the vision this piece brought upon me. The delivery is truly excellent and its definitely got me following you now ,your way of writing is ...

Hello, This was a very compelling and beautiful read and im really greatful that I got to read it. Needless to say I have some pointers that maybe could help ...

Hello First Great work! Looking forward to reading more from you in days to come. I like this short chapter format For it does have potential to be used in ...

Hello awesome read! The way you approached the topic is quite unique , in times past I hadn't read a poem that touched "what happened to us" like this , ...

Hello! I believe this is your first post (since your profile says you have no prior posts) so awesome work! Just wanted I like your poem, and I understand the ...

Hello, just wanted to say interesting poem! It was intense and I could feel the anger , see the crimson red blood all in my head. Just some pointers about ...

Hello, i have to say i really like the subject of your price and could imagine what you meant very vividly! Just some things, I believe the word you were ...

Hey there just wanted to say it was a very fun lyrical read in my head it sounded like Gioachino Rossini's "William Tell Overture" with a good folky feel but ...